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'treasured Moments'

Something different Concerning today it’s not a hello, maybe a goodbye maybe acceptance. Embracing life, the joy and pain being blessed with love from you. I treasured our moments together a hug, a kiss bye! Contest: If I only had one day to live HM

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 6:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Wilma. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/22/2011 10:22:00 PM

Nice going, Wilma. Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Walayee's contest with this entry.

John Freeman

Date: 2/22/2011 9:44:00 AM

Beautiful Poem Wilma, good to see your most worthy poem's success.. Congratulations on your poem's honored HM. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/18/2011 9:26:00 PM

A sweet goodbye note, Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/18/2011 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of walayee, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2011 6:01:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Lay's contest with this lovely write and entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/30/2011 7:14:00 AM

Lovely word, Wilma! Hoop jy het 'n goeie tyd! Jammer vir die wat nie veel op Soup afgelope tyd vir kommentaar! Al die beste en het 'n groot nuwe week! ... Gert:)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/28/2011 1:49:00 PM

Wonderful write love... every word flows so nicely... Hope you didnt think I stole your title lol.... on my colab with the Mystey Lady... with love Michael

Christopher Marcum

Date: 1/26/2011 8:18:00 AM

smile -- i love the frankness of this wonderfully expressed piece spoken amid i would have believe, a sincere light as well as from, a strong spirit -- and yet, life does go on for All and hopefully for your own beauty it shall forever hold happiness, joy and love; excellent painting -- love, christopher

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/26/2011 7:57:00 AM

If this is for the contest....great piece, in so few words needed! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2011 6:43:00 AM

A different perspective, Wilma. NOt a hello but a bye, and a very reflective one. Glad to see this diminished Hexaverse from you, lady! Have a great day (or night,I can't keep straight the time difference!) Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2011 4:51:00 AM

Embracing life with joy and pain.. sums it up so beautifully Wilma.. and then the treasured moments of luv together.. luv those hugs and kisses my friend.. enjoyed with luv..

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 1/26/2011 4:27:00 AM

memories can be a strange storage space...a vault of treasures,as you have stated,or a dungeon of darkened places some have a hard time forgetting.....peace , jay