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Tranquil Moonscape

hidden Moon valley where endless lake greets Earth rise peace between planets _______________________ for Raul's Reflections contest

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Richard Pickett

Date: 12/27/2009 9:54:00 AM

Very nice Haiku here James...Great flow....Good work....God Bless...Taz

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/19/2009 2:30:00 AM

Congratulations Moses, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this heartfelt poem. Your poetic skills shine in this one. I particularly like the idea of peace between planets. Keep the writings flowing, my friend. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/11/2009 10:17:00 AM

Love anything where there are planets involved and space, really loved short and powerful poetry here. Have a great day. :):)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/11/2009 2:33:00 AM

Congratulations on making the hot list. Well deserving piece excellently written once again James.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/8/2009 10:33:00 PM

Oh, I guess you won! I'm not surprise. :) Cheers, Caroline.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/8/2009 10:31:00 PM

Interesting Haiku and outlook. I enjoyed the view and the peace evoked. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem, including noticing grit. :) Best wishes, Caroline.

James Peranteau

Date: 12/8/2009 10:59:00 AM

This Sir reflects all poets long to express,....great poem Mr. Goff !!!!!! james

Veronica Joseph

Date: 12/8/2009 7:54:00 AM

I enjoyed the tranquility of this work of art.

John Freeman

Date: 12/7/2009 10:07:00 AM

Jolly good show, Jim Boy. Congratulations on this fine Haiku. Sincerely, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/7/2009 5:17:00 AM

Great imagery here, Jimbo! Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Reflections" contest! Peace and love, Audrey

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/5/2009 5:48:00 AM

enjoyed this piece of poetry so short and full of star trek moments. Enjoyed and have a great day. :) hope you read my new poem about God and him calling our hearts!

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 12/4/2009 7:17:00 PM

I am always so amazed when I see good Haikus thanks for sharing

James Fraser

Date: 12/4/2009 12:54:00 PM

Awesome Haiku, this sure rivals the picture Raul posted >> James

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/4/2009 7:03:00 AM

Yes, Jimmy no star wars nor dreams of holocaust ... essential true to the poetic vision. One love and peace

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/4/2009 4:30:00 AM

Congrats on your win...a lovely picturesque haiku you have penned here..thanks so much for sharing and for reading my works~Mary

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 9:47:00 AM

Awesome Haiku, James. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 1:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win,James. simply beautiful. Love, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/2/2009 7:29:00 PM

just coming back to say Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Jimbo :) Your unique lines definitely stand out and yet wonderfully complement each other! thanks for the kind comments & greetings as well :) Enjoy your day!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/2/2009 4:05:00 PM

nice reflective Haiku, James. Congratulations! -Robert

Susan Mills

Date: 12/2/2009 4:02:00 PM

Excellent haiku. Peaceful!