Trance Dance

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Angels in disguise Interact with us It is, as ordained Solely for soul growth As love’s thus ingrained To recognise Game underway We cease to size To life pulse sway Soul’s vibrance Exits trance As we dance We see All as One 18-June-2022 Diminished Hexaverse Contest Your Choice of Subject Poetry Contest Sponsor: Karen Crutsinger

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2022 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations, US, to a beautiful inspiring verse. We see all as one, very well deserved win. Blessings my friend

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/14/2022 1:28:00 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2022 5:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Seeker. Well crafted. Blessings xxoo

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/12/2022 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! I don’t use this form much these days but Caren’s contest brought it up ~ with happy results, as it appears!

Valsa George

Date: 7/11/2022 9:40:00 PM

Seeing all as one is the heightened moment of sublimity ! In most of your poems you celebrate this acme of consciousness ! Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, dear Seeker friend !

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/11/2022 9:43:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/11/2022 5:25:00 PM

Such beauty coming from an angelic host, unseeking seeker. May the angels dance around you! Congratulations for your high placement! I was starting to think that Caren forgot or something, but then, she is busy posting away for at least two other poetry sights that I know of!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/11/2022 6:29:00 PM

Amazing! What are these sites you speak of?