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Trample, More Like Trampled

Trampled underfoot Two words that describe my life Initially my first fiancée And latterly my wife To be cheated on Then a broken trust In monetary and in love Like ageing bread, I'd be the crust To their Lions Is where I awake Dazed and confused How much more can I take My peripheral world is hazy Whom we meet, their sometimes not Trample, more like trampled My name is James, forget me not

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/10/2014 9:39:00 AM

oh.. :O?! this a deep strike to the heart mr. james.. anyhow, I believe you are that strong and kind enough to go on and be happy still.. :) I believe someday still, someone will heal all those scars.. :) i see congratulations below.. ! belated. :D

James Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 11:49:00 AM

Many thanks Olive, James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2012 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on the super win in ~Paula's~ "Trample" contest James. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/18/2012 4:25:00 PM

Congratulations!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/18/2012 4:29:00 AM

Who could forget you James after that. Time doesn't, but hearts do heal. Congrats

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/17/2012 3:31:00 PM

James, I feel your pain, brother. I have walked that road myself, a couple of times and it's not fun. Look on the bright side, you have a wonderful poem from the experience and this poem will never break your heart, like women tend to do. Well done and keep writing, sometimes that's all we have to fall back on. Congrats on making the winners list....................S.Ronthorpe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 9:10:00 AM

That woman must have done a number on you, James. Congrats on your win with this unique poem. I love how you personalized that last line. My name is James, forget me not. A perfect ending!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/17/2012 7:29:00 AM

We wont forget you James..congrats on this fine write, although its very sad...BG

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/17/2012 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write James, love Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 9:30:00 PM

congrats James on a magnificent win for outstanding write on trample luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 2/16/2012 9:27:00 PM

Congrats James on your win.Enjoyed the read.Hope it is not true story.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/16/2012 9:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win James. Good descriptive words and rhymes here.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/16/2012 8:30:00 PM

To be trampled on by someone you love is a low blow. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Daver Austin

Date: 2/15/2012 11:37:00 AM

From the looks of your picture, James, you are very young. Well, you're just getting started. Take it from a very OLD trampled one. Hey! Keep writing! With me you always communicate. Love, daver