Town Children

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town children walk dead paths past dark houses ghost residences wasted places possessing hope for none 8/7/19 Town Children Poetry Contest 2nd place Sponsor, Julia Ward August Ninette Poetry Contest Sponsor, Caren Krutsinger 1st place

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/12/2019 7:44:00 PM

Sadness beyond bearing in your words. Congratulations on your top placement.

Constance La France

Date: 10/12/2019 12:28:00 PM

Janis, congratulations on your win in Julia's contest with this poignant and sadly true poem, well done !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2019 8:58:00 AM

A sad one, congrats on your win.

Joseph May

Date: 10/11/2019 10:27:00 PM

So sad when there is no hope..Congrats on your win Janis

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/11/2019 11:25:00 AM

Wow... so deep for so few words. Well done and congrats on your win !!

John Lawless

Date: 10/11/2019 9:27:00 AM

Succinct us of this difficult form in a very bleak, yet all too true, depiction.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/10/2019 10:19:00 PM

Congrats on your winner in the Town Children Contest (and the August Ninette contest too). That Town Children contest was really competitive. Nice going! Best wishes, Gershon

Janis Thompson
Date: 10/11/2019 9:15:00 AM