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Touch Me - Sleep

I lay here in deep slumber, feel my breath upon your face as you lay near me. Place your fingertips through my hair, and you wonder what I dream. Brush up close against me, you want to feel warmth. Embrace this space while I sleep. Peaceful bliss. Hug me now, If you please I want to feel your tender strong arms. Your eyes are heavy too. Together we sleep awhile. I feel your heart beat like a drum, so I'm unsure if I'm still sleeping. I lay here in this moment and enjoy. By Emma Buckeridge. Count down and count up form for contest. 4th place win

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Date: 5/1/2011 8:11:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Emma. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 4/29/2011 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations Emma on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:35:00 PM
congrats on this lovely poem being a winner. Its sweet and yet sensual..BG
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:20:00 AM
Wonderful write Emma.Congrats on your win--kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:14:00 AM
Awesome write ...Congrats Emma on your well deserved winning place.luv gautami
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:51:00 AM
What a beautiful love poem, Emma. Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congrats Emma on your super win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry..
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:44:00 AM
This sure is a wonderful etheree on sleep, and is very romantic too-- really enjoyed this one, Emma! Super congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:57:00 PM
Good Job.
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:51:00 PM
Congratulation Emma on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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