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Too Young For Dates, Too Old For Dolls

On a silver eve The moon aperch lavender walls Silver slivered through black-green vines. Little girls cross-legged On a dutch-girl quilt spread Dreaming one and one. Will he find me? My love? Be the one to beat my heart? Will I know him? I want an adventurer, A rough-cut man, strong hands And I will know he’s mine. Oh, no, I’d rather he A sweet and rich man be, and Give me babes and gowns. On a silver night The moon aperch lavender walls, Little girls cross-legged sighed.

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Date: 11/13/2017 8:48:00 AM
What a pretty poem! I absolutely adore the ideas and words here. Wonderful write.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/13/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for finding this poem and making such a nice comment.
Date: 10/7/2017 6:41:00 PM
A delightful write, Sunlite! thoroughly enjoyed it. Many thx for your kind comments re the old Guys write (of which I are one!) Haven't written much lately, but now and then the light bulb goes off with an idea. Best to you - Bob h
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Date: 10/3/2017 12:54:00 PM
Hi Sunny one, I still way deep down dream. This is so realistic the wistful dreams of love.
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Date: 10/3/2017 9:25:00 AM
Sunlite, such a charming poem, I loved it !
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Date: 10/2/2017 4:05:00 PM
charming girlhood wishes... sun, a remarkable write from you.. huggs
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