Too Young For Dates, Too Old For Dolls

On a silver eve The moon aperch lavender walls Silver slivered through black-green vines. Little girls cross-legged On a dutch-girl quilt spread Dreaming one and one. Will he find me? My love? Be the one to beat my heart? Will I know him? I want an adventurer, A rough-cut man, strong hands And I will know he’s mine. Oh, no, I’d rather he A sweet and rich man be, and Give me babes and gowns. On a silver night The moon aperch lavender walls, Little girls cross-legged sighed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Blade Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:48 AM
What a pretty poem! I absolutely adore the ideas and words here. Wonderful write.
Wanter Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Thank you for finding this poem and making such a nice comment.
Hinshaw Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 6:41 PM
A delightful write, Sunlite! thoroughly enjoyed it. Many thx for your kind comments re the old Guys write (of which I are one!) Haven't written much lately, but now and then the light bulb goes off with an idea. Best to you - Bob h
Cresswell Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Hi Sunny one, I still way deep down dream. This is so realistic the wistful dreams of love.
La France Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Sunlite, such a charming poem, I loved it !
Onclaud Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 4:05 PM
charming girlhood wishes... sun, a remarkable write from you.. huggs
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace