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Too Far Gone

Too far gone it seems, heart's deluded dreams, distanced from the truth, caged in ego's booth. The rot's sunk in deep, fears and desires seep, as a dark spiral, that has gone viral. Remedies we seek only make us weak, as our goalposts shift, leaving us adrift. We must understand, the key's in our hand, for we alone choose, fragrance of our muse. Moments of true joy were sans ego ploy, when we then did flow, vibrant and aglow. Stagnation the cause, which if put on pause, enables release from thinking disease. Relinquish belief and get some relief, looking at each hue, once again anew. Simply being still, surrendering will, our form's magnetised; God thus realised. We're not mind-body or a somebody but are living light, to learn love's delight. Once our heart knows this, we're suffused with bliss, as God's true essence ~ self-luminescence. 05-July-2022 Pick-A-Title, Vol 31 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
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Anaya Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations US. on your win in Mr. Ibeh's contest! Your juejus most devoutly pious and zestfully enthusiastic. Always pleasurable to read! ~Anaya
Seeker Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, Anaya!
Ibeh Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Absolutely brilliant, Seeker! Loved this poem of yours. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Seeker Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:40 PM
Always delighted to participate in your innovative ci test themes, Edward. In fact, I wrote a poem on each of the topics :) Thank you for the recognition
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful "write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Seeker Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Thank you Paula dear
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:02 AM
Relinquish belief and get some relief, looking at each hue, once again anew. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Seeker. Great insight and rhyme.
Seeker Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you, dear Sotto
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 4:50 AM
"We'r not mind-body or a somebody but are living light, to learn love's delight"..... Proverbial words . If we never allow our wordly aspirations too far gone, we will be able to be illumined by the living light ! Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win, dear friend !
Seeker Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:42 AM
Thank you, Valsa :)
Radice Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 2:04 AM
I find your words speak to the human spirit and soul, Unseeking. I had to look up the jeuju form as I'd never heard of it before and was amazed to find that it's a Chinese quatrain that dates back possibly to the Tang Dynasty. I'm forever learning at Poetry Soup. Cheers - Gary
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 2:42 AM
I was introduced to this form by Constance ~ one of her contests required it. I’ve kind of taken to it, compact and succinct.
Mccann Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 1:37 AM
Your insight and your artistic skill are amazing. On both counts, I'm still learning. Elizabeth
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 2:43 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 12:29 AM
Great connection between man and God.
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 2:43 AM
In fact there is no separation from God, other than our imagined, deluded belief
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