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Tomorrow

Oh, I wonder what will tomorrow bring, will I open my eyes to a new day; will I have happiness and sweetly sing, or again fall upon my knees and pray. Will I open my eyes to a new day- I do wish my sorrow to stop, stop, stop; or again fall upon my knees and pray, a tear drips down like a raindrop. I do wish my sorrow to stop, stop, stop, I want what other people just enjoy; a tear drips down like a raindrop, all sadness I want to ever destroy. I want what other people just enjoy, darling, I must turn away from your grave; all sadness I want to ever destroy, will I be brave sweetheart and my soul save. Darling, I must turn away from your grave, will I have happiness and sweetly sing; will I be brave sweetheart and my soul save, oh, I wonder what will tomorrow bring. ____________________________ June 4, 2017 Pantoum/Tomorrow Copyright Protected, ID 906891 Written for the contest, Pantoum Form What Will Tomorrow Bring Sponsor, Eve Roper Second Place

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Date: 7/4/2017 8:23:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Broken Wings, thank you for entering my contest, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 6/13/2017 8:33:00 AM
Brilliantly developed within this structure.
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Date: 6/12/2017 12:17:00 PM
This is lovely Constance. So well done. It is hard to wrap your arms around this form let alone communicate such strong feelings as you have in this fine piece. Enjoyed it a lot! Dean
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Date: 6/11/2017 2:48:00 PM
Such beautiful words crafted so elegantly Constance, really loved this, very well done hope things OK with you, blessings Gordon
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Date: 6/9/2017 7:58:00 PM
What a beautiful well written poem dedication, and put together so nicely. The way you constructed you verses and sentences is so unique, and so heart felt. I pray for the ease of your pain. Enjoyable read!
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Date: 6/8/2017 9:37:00 AM
This is a touching write, Constance:) hoping and praying you get well really soon:)
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Date: 6/6/2017 4:25:00 PM
Lovely read, Constance! Best of luck to you
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Date: 6/5/2017 3:46:00 PM
Hi , Broken Wings , powerful emotional write , grief is so hard to deal with for so many some people find it so hard to move on, the passing of time is the only way to ease the pain :((
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Date: 6/5/2017 3:58:00 AM
Constance it seems you have written this with such ease and I really admire that. I have never been successful at even writing one of these. This is poignant and lovely my friend! ; )
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