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Together We Are Strong

What do I say to you, my daughter, dear, now wed, mother of two, life upside down? A nightmare of sad changes and unknowns, since early-onset Parkinson's has come... to take away your love of many years. You're slowly losing him; he's not the same. Your daughters, now eighteen and twenty-three, miss too, the wonderful 'old dad' they love. And you, dear son-in-law, my heart is crushed; no longer can you work the job you held for over twenty years, where you excelled. Hard to accept this doom, fate brings to us. What do I say to all of you? No words... except to say, I'm here for you each day, to wipe your tears, allay your broken hearts. I'm here for you...together, we are strong. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Together We Are Strong Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 03/22/2018 Form: Blank Verse - 10 syllables, 5 feet per line. Some of you may remember from my former poems, that our younger daughter's husband, was diagnosed with early-onset Parkinson's disease, both motor and cognitive, three years ago, when he was 50 years old. Fortunately, they live close by, and we are here for them to help in whatever way we can...so heartbreaking and very sad.

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Date: 3/26/2018 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra ,great meaningful verse .. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/26/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, for your always much appreciated visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/24/2018 11:42:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/26/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, as always Line, for your wonderful support and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/24/2018 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This truly so sad but at the same time so loving and encouraging.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/26/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. Sad indeed. But I appreciate your uplifting comment and congratulations so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/23/2018 1:05:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. The sadness is expressed so nicely poetically.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2018 6:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Subimal, for your congratulations and lovely words of support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/23/2018 12:57:00 AM
A beautiful sad verse Sandra. Well deserved win. Tom
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 3/22/2018 4:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/22/2018 5:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/22/2018 4:01:00 PM
A brilliant poem about support in a difficult situation... Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/22/2018 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, SO, for another fine contest, your supportive comments, and my placement. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 3/16/2018 1:36:00 PM
I falter in my attempt to comment on a poem's quality when it's sad/reality. You already know I respect your talent that never fails to awe me. I've said so many times. Using that talent you have moved all in me that is empathy based which is truly the majority of me. So young, too young, it's devastating. Please accept my sympathy. He is God's child first and foremost, I often have to remind myself of that truth when wondering 'why' in respect to those I love. You have my prayers ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2018 7:37:00 PM
Dear CayCay, thank you so very much for your so kind and comforting words and prayers. We all have our crosses to bear one way or another. I so appreciate your visit and emotional uplift. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/14/2018 2:49:00 PM
What a poignant poem. It is especially sad when a family member is stricken by a life-changing illness. I am seeing people all around me that need encouragement and support to fight adversity in their lives. Yes, together we are stronger. Prayers and love sent to you and your loved ones. Hugs. Janece
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thank you for your kind, supportive words, Janece. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/14/2018 10:23:00 AM
Oh Sandra, such deep and heartfelt emotions are revealed in your moving poem and felt in my heart for all that your family is enduring.. Your heartbroken feelings are conveyed in your sadly beautiful and loving poem. Warmest wishes and hugs..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, for your kind words and heartfelt support. We all have crosses to bear one way or another. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/14/2018 2:42:00 AM
A very moving piece, Sandra, but holds some solace in your promises and commitment. Having lost a longtime pal to Parkinsons last year, I can relate to your painful journey. Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Viv. Sandra
Date: 3/14/2018 12:28:00 AM
This was deeply moving!! I forgot to say
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Date: 3/14/2018 12:13:00 AM
Yes, that is so sad about him. I am glad you live nearby to help. We live very far from Joe's family and the mom just died so now we are worried about the dad, who has MANY problems. Truly in your poem, the theme rings strongly.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/13/2018 8:31:00 PM
O Sandra, what a touching poem. All my best to you. Line xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line. Hugs, Sandra

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