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This poem was originally written in Decembe 2015, for a friend who was going through some problems. Today the same friend is facing many obstacles and I ask people to include her in your prayers. Thank you. Oh my distant friend, let me take care of your broken soul, let my arms be your shelter - your sanctuary. The path ahead may seem obscure, hold my hand, let me guide you home, don't be nervous, you can rely upon me. Take my strength, hope and spirituality, let them be the foundations for stability. There will be days full of darkness but you have the power to conduct light deep within your heart - the will to survive. Sometimes you will want to give up but, remember, I need you, your friendship is so special, we need you - you brighten up our day, they need you - your love is irreplaceable. Together we can sing words of wisdom. When you are drowning, let me be your bridge over troubled water, I won't pretend - I will stand by you - I get angry too, lean on me - we all have pain - we all have sorrow. Any day of the week, I'll be there - you just gotta call. Be at peace my friend. Together we are strong. Dedicated to a special friend. Silent One Originally written December 2015, reposted 10 March 2018. Song references in last stanza are intentional.

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Date: 3/18/2018 12:38:00 PM
A wonderful concern towards another human being Silent, I hope we all have a friend like you in dark days;-)
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Date: 3/12/2018 8:45:00 AM
Lucky gal to have such a kindhearted friend working for her.
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda, not really work though lol
Date: 3/12/2018 8:45:00 AM
A poem from the heart is the best gift you can give to someone.. hope your friend finds comfort and strength:) great dedication, SO:)
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you Jo, I hope so too..
Date: 3/11/2018 8:54:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes Silent One. Your heart is a treasure my dear One. She is very fortunate.
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Shadow.. I am sure many can relate to this..
Date: 3/11/2018 7:56:00 AM
A friend like you is indeed a special gift and a blessing. Sometimes we just need someone who truly believes in our light and reminds us that it is there. Sometimes we need that special person from whom we can garner strength which we have forgotten we possess in the face of life’s trials. Prayers for your friend Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:30:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet words Judy..
Date: 3/11/2018 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful dedication to your dear friend..prayers sent...best wishes
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Melissa... Especially for the prayers..
Date: 3/11/2018 4:21:00 AM
A heart-felt message to a lucky friend, and you both have my prayers and good wishes. Friends are irreplaceable!
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:40:00 PM
I agree, thank you Caren..
Date: 3/10/2018 9:05:00 PM
Beautiful and so clearly sincere. No truer friend than thee, he treads always Silently.
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Leanne..
Date: 3/10/2018 7:38:00 PM
Wonderful words of comfort Si, your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you in her life, I do hope she gets to see this poem of encouragement and strength. Straight from the heart, and I love it....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Maria..
Date: 3/10/2018 5:19:00 PM
Such a deep, loving and touching dedication Silent One. Beautiful poetic lines of love, support and encouragement 'you have the power to conduct light deep within your heart - the will to survive' - profound my friend. I love your poem and I love this performance by two of my favorite singers/songwriters, Carole King and James Taylor. I hope your friend finds comfort, strength and peace in your heartfelt words..
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Silent One
Date: 3/12/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you for your comprehensive feedback, always great to get your viewpoint Susan.. Thank you..
Date: 3/10/2018 2:52:00 PM
Very caring and touching depiction..great for her to have a friend like you. A heartfelt dedication, Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 4:42:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 3/10/2018 1:33:00 PM
I also consider you a friend Silent, on the public forums we both share. I feel blessed, even though that really is only the equivalent of touching the hem of your garment. She is lucky to have your support.
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Jean..
Date: 3/10/2018 12:21:00 PM
I hope your comforting words bring her peace. You are a good friend. Too bad we can not cure the world of pain and suffering but it is nice to know you try.
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thank you DT, I don't even know if she has read it... Sometimes life can become too much and people just want to hide away, I just hope she returns soon smiling...
Date: 3/10/2018 12:01:00 PM
This person is lucky to have a friend like you. I pray all will be okay. It’s so heartbreaking when someone we love is suffering. A beautiful and touching poem.
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Carol, it is hard, especially as this person is suffering from so many different things and trying to be strong..
Date: 3/10/2018 11:54:00 AM
Hi Silent One , beautiful dedication I will say a prayer for both of you ' Amen'
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thank you for you compassion Niall..
Date: 3/10/2018 11:47:00 AM
Not everyone is blessed with such special friendship, which must be cherished. Beautifully written.
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Peter, your words are very kind..
Date: 3/10/2018 7:58:00 AM
A special friend is priceless, a great dedication S.O., I hope your friend is ok. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Tom, so do I, but not heard from her..
Date: 3/10/2018 7:54:00 AM
Really nice...One of my favorite artists too... he exudes peace and love... All the best SO
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Silent One
Date: 3/10/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Arturo..

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