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Toddler Sky

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Toddler Sky

-Toddler Sky-

Down where I sleep, 
You hold me, embrace my every way
The Marks up on my skin
You caress, taking away from the ugliness

Watching the simple breath, when I breathe
Breaking the ice, soothing my inner peace
A sweet spray across the paleness in my limbs
Holding the warmth, I've been loved throughout my life.
From picking up sticks to the walking stick
My loving dear I know you will always be there
A few wheel chairs, when broken bones mend
You know my every cure*
Walk with me across the hall
Through the oldness, and the boldness of every color in the sky
Thank you for taking me as I am
A light twinkle' every time I feel the colors of the rainbow drip
Now a newborn takes his form
In you I find the strength to stretch my arms and reach for every star

When happy moments fail, 
I embraced the colors I found in you
I make out every tree, and wonder why and how?
I close my eyes to imagine the fun of chasing fireflies
Tonight I'm keeping my prayers simple, cute, and innocent
I will count sheep and search for sweet lullaby dreams
Smiling like a 3 year old this very moment, 
You think I'm having "Baby Blues."
My loving dear, thanks for having patience,
Painting my way down a toddlers sky
Every time  "P M S" hits

~SKAT~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 7/19/2016 2:07:00 PM
> When happy moments fail, I embraced the colors I found in you < excellent lines... I like this poem a lot... Many congratulations for this one...
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Date: 4/15/2016 9:38:00 AM
It seems I am drawn back to this one once again. I have missed your visits. I hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/31/2016 11:26:00 AM
As always Skat, an excellent write from your pen. From the title to the end of the piece you lead us on the journey and what a touching journey it is my friend. In this piece you use the free verse form to its complete potential. This is a seven for sure and into my faves it goes....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/15/2016 2:18:00 PM
I could really relate to the emotions conveyed in this creative piece SKAT. I don't think anyone can understand what this feels like unless they have suffered from it. I unfortunately passed this to all three of my daughters. This is a beautiful poem! #7
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Date: 10/18/2015 7:32:00 PM
Skat a beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Can you hear me God ~~
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Date: 8/21/2015 7:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again SKAT. Thanks for all your kind visits.
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:49:00 PM
seeing this one again and getting another chuckle out of that last line!!
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:25:00 AM
Ha ha loved it and the PMS bit at the end was a nice twist. I was drawn by the title and was not disappointed.
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:34:00 PM
I thought i had seen everyone of the Skat poems but this one I am not sure about. I really like it, if i did not say that before!! I'm half through my vacation today and Joe turns 60. Poor guy. I am not far behind him!!! Oh happy days for us. (yeah right)
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Date: 5/29/2015 4:00:00 PM
Woah sublime and sensational! Makes me tink of postnatal blues, pMS, all in one. Written in a stylish way! Kudos for the expression. And warmest thanx.
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Date: 7/15/2014 9:55:00 AM
SKAT Enjoy the intimacy and vulnerability in this poem and all of yours. Glenn
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Date: 7/7/2014 8:30:00 PM
Wow very deep, heartfelt thanks for sharing :-)
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:37:00 PM
Enjoyed the write Skat. Thanks for your comments on my poems. It has been not a great spring as I was down with a 2 month virus and we had 3 deaths in the family. It was a rough beginning of the year . I may have told you this already and if i have then you know. thanks. love phyl
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Date: 5/23/2014 9:17:00 AM
wow,wonderful write Skat,love the journey
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Date: 5/1/2014 9:46:00 PM
SKAT What a unique and interesting write. The imagery and descriptiveness is so real and vivid that it pulls the reader from beginning to end. Thank you for the lovely comment on my Moon Madness poem
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:49:00 AM
Hi SKAT - Thank you for stopping by. The title of this poem caught my eye and just had to read. Was not disappointed! Unique and full of beautiful description. - Gail
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:26:00 AM
Hello, my new Friend. I Enjoyed this writing !!!.Very Nice. Sure I will get to read them all. Thank you..
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Date: 3/5/2014 9:03:00 PM
Nice descriptiveness again. Here is the link to my poem about Baldwin, Michigan: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=279812
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Date: 2/21/2014 1:57:00 AM
Beautiful Skat... Well versed and flows perfectly... Verlena - Dark Sunshine
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Date: 2/12/2014 10:22:00 AM
SImple images - great use of language.
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Date: 1/29/2014 7:53:00 PM
This poem is very well expressed, SKAT, and so heartfelt. The imagery painted within these tender lines is just wonderful! I am so glad that you have found true love and happiness, because you deserve it!
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Date: 1/27/2014 10:10:00 AM
Hi SKAT; Am going to devote most of my morning to reading poetry, and am pleased I chose this one to begin with. It is so poignant-then you "flip the script" in the last line, "Every time "P M S" hits"...smile. A truly delightful piece, Thanks so much for sharing. xoxoxoxo Robert
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Date: 1/26/2014 11:38:00 PM
Wow!! This is fabulous. You are very creative, and I absolutely love your style!
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:16:00 AM
My lovely friend, just I have enlisted as one of my fav. poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 1/26/2014 5:14:00 AM
Loved my trip through the clouds with you . Thanks so much . I have 5 sisters , All older than me . I learned how to recognise ''P.M.S. at a very young age . Not so sure I want to thank you for that memory. LOL
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