Today I Weep

As I lay underneath a giant weeping Willow tree; I strolled down memory lane and my heart went out to a naive girl who had no clue what was in store for her. I wept for the hand she was dealt. I weep because she didn't have no idea that a boogie man was lurking in the dark, waiting to pounce on her and mar her innocent soul. His face was of a man who was supposed to love and protect her. I weep for her many scars. Although she smiled big and bright she was in much pain. I weep for the dreams she’ll never have due to many nightmares. In case you didn't know that girl was me. 11/22/2021 Contest: “W” New Poems Only Sponsor: Constance La France

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Charles Messina

Date: 12/1/2021 5:31:00 AM

Seems to me that naive girl turned out to be that beautiful swan. Life throws many curveballs at us...only the strongest can dodge them. Stay strong, Alexis. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie xo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/30/2021 8:32:00 AM

WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful yet very sad story/write. So sorry. Life is filled with pain/hurt. Some people are evil. More evil today than ever before. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2021 2:06:00 PM

Alexis, congratulations on your Second Place in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful ~ love and serenity _Constance

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/30/2021 8:53:00 AM

Hi Constance, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. PS, I hope that you are feeling better. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/27/2021 1:51:00 PM

I completely understand such trauma and have met many who have experienced this. You have expressed this superbly. I am so sorry you have experienced thisl. You are a survivor with much strength. Bless you :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/27/2021 8:00:00 AM

Dear Alexis, I have to tell you that this poem touched me so much I felt I am a co-writer with you. I sometimes weep for an innocent girl - "a naive girl who had no clue what was in store for her". Congratulations on your win. Love and hugs ~ Mala

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2021 7:32:00 AM

I hzve a huge lump in my throat and tears in my eyes, Thanks for sharing alexis, ypu are a survivor my friend, many congratulations on your win, hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/26/2021 5:25:00 AM

This is a painful memory, but glad you found the strength to write about it, Alexis, only our Lord can comfort you during the nights:) congratulations on your win:)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/25/2021 8:45:00 PM

A familiar tale, horrific and yet we must transcend, healing ourself, forgiving the transgressor, by choosing to suffuse our heart in God’s healing light. Congrats on your win

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/24/2021 11:49:00 AM

Hi Alexis, you are strong, you have done no wrong, I weep for your past, but know you'll hold fast! A very special write which you chose to share my friend - thank you. Hugs and blessings , Jennifer.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/24/2021 8:24:00 AM

Thank you for sharing the pain of your past, Alexis. May God comfort you. A friend and poet, Bill

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/24/2021 6:43:00 AM

A terrible experience Alexis, you never forget it. I hope you are keeping well and I hope that you have a lovely thanksgiving tomorrow. Tom

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/23/2021 3:04:00 PM

Pretty chilling... It must have been a long time ago, Alexis; you seem to have recovered nicely. Season's best, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/23/2021 1:11:00 PM

Alexis, your poem is so sad and touching. I'm glad you're a survivor, and your strength is inspiring. Kindest regards, Evelyn

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/23/2021 11:15:00 AM

Our current news in Honolulu concerns a couple who adopted foster children then locked them in dog cages and starved them to death. I wonder how many people stand at Saint Peter's Gate and say, "Don't classify me as human! I was never one of them!"

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/23/2021 6:05:00 AM

Your poignant write tugs the heart my friend. You speak for many, Alexis.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2021 2:57:00 AM

I feel for the girl of whom you write. I can feel the pain and fear plus the lifetime of hurt she experienced. So many children, young middle age children and teens and young adults are hurt by someone that should love them. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/23/2021 1:47:00 AM

As far as I am concerned rape is as bad as murder and deserve a life sentence. ~~

Judy Ball

Date: 11/23/2021 1:30:00 AM

A very heartfelt and deeply moving piece my friend. There are many young girls and boys too who have been so scarred, kids who believe in people who have no right to be near anyone or anything who cannot defend themselves. A fine write my fried. God Bless, JB