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To Walk a Mile In Her Shoes

Would I dare to walk a mile in her shoes To put my feet in cinder's slippers marry a handsome prince who turns out to be another Jafar Would I dare to let the glass shards of those tight slippers slice open my heels till I bleed Would I dare to let dignity purse my lips tightly and let pride silence the cry Would I dare to own her brains to taste mental yeast's bitter shame Would I be the servant and cook the tutor,cab driver,the warrior ,the lover the whor* of an unfinished book to be thanked by insults and be called out names To be the one that He always blames Would I dare feel the sweat of his fist without being bruised nor being hit Would I find Alice,call her a fool Does she know ,there is no wonderland if you live to the vow and play by the rule What about God,His promised land Does this hourglassed desert ever feel the touch of His hand Will She taste frosted manna if She runs far away Or would she challenge the bully and have it her way Does her dream ever leave the blues Would he look in her eyes Would He dare to walk a mile in her shoes?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/26/2016 6:50:00 AM
Some times we forget about the other people and are too worried about ourselves. Luckily we are all human and have the ability to apologize and change our ways. A beautiful poem with great insight and meaning. Have a terrific day my dear friend.
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:20:00 PM
Excellent!! Love the way you have handled the theme.
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Date: 4/16/2015 2:32:00 PM
Nice poem Charmaine. I especially like the way you turned it around for the ending, putting him in her shoes. It's shocking how many women are still treated this way. We need more poems like yours! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:25:00 AM
What a brilliant way to approach this important issue my dear friend. This poem is sublime. A Fav!
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Date: 4/1/2015 1:30:00 PM
Super 7 on this jewel. You have penned a gem here and it was a pleasure to read today!
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Date: 3/12/2015 3:59:00 PM
Well said! hugs!
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Date: 3/12/2015 11:03:00 AM
A 7, Charmaine, a wonderful tribute to all the abused souls men, women, and children. Bless you
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Date: 3/12/2015 10:49:00 AM
7 all the way! This is beyond amazing, I am so impressed!
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Date: 3/12/2015 9:15:00 AM
Awesome write, Charma. So many things to ponder on while reading. Hope you enjoyed International Women's Day :) xxx Wilma
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Date: 3/10/2015 10:03:00 PM
To walk a mile in her shoes is to know the pain of love and the joy of courage, to feel the shame of sorrow and the fury and fun of freedom...maybe God has walked with you all along my Lady Hawk, and has not stopped you yet :) This is artistry of life well fought for, "Does her dream ever leave the blues..." I love the intellectual/moral frustration in this poem Charma...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:21:00 AM
I absolutely loved this piece and read it three times.
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Date: 3/10/2015 5:34:00 AM
outstanding piece of writing charmaine so many women in todays world have no voice i believe all women are treasures should be treated with respect they are the mothers of generations abuse in my eyes is the devils evil no one in my eyes should suffer at the hands of another cruelty is wrong in any light excellent pen dear pal this should be poem of the day powerful pen
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Date: 3/9/2015 9:46:00 PM
Wow Charmaine, thank you for continuing to shine light on abused women. A powerful and excellent write! Hugs
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Date: 3/9/2015 12:31:00 PM
powerful and filled with empathy.. your work glows, charms!.. happy women's day.. huggs
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Date: 3/8/2015 10:22:00 PM
A moving, eloquent protest, dear Charma. Putting the words in the form of a question delivers the punch without sounding like an accusing tirade, but instead more effective. 7+++++++! HUgs. :) Kim
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Date: 3/8/2015 5:27:00 AM
A roaring protest of thunderous and lightning verses that even Zeus unable could be to reproduce, dear Charmaine! The greatest merit: the raising of this issue! Bravo and a seven times seven!
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Date: 3/8/2015 4:13:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:21:00 PM
Couldn't add any more to what Eileen wrote, wow factor is so high, hugs, James :) :)
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Date: 3/7/2015 1:44:00 PM
Very powerful write, my dear Charmaine. You wrote with conviction and power. It is an excellent piece, dear. Hugs
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:20:00 PM
Your words define the heart of poetry, simple and emotionally charged. Great work with the magic touch of a free soaring poetic heart. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:59:00 AM
I just took part in an event at the "Inspired Word Cafe" to celebrate International Women's Day. I was a guest poet. This would have been a great poem to read.
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:59:00 AM
If you have a chance, my Tell Me poem is completed.
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:00:00 AM
Well said.
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Date: 3/7/2015 1:03:00 AM
Good to see you standing up for their rights with your poem, Charma. Some of those women face unimaginable terror. it's horrendous!
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Date: 3/6/2015 11:12:00 PM
I just loved this one! A7
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