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To the Rich Lady Who Once Loved Too Much

When ashamed of failings yet honored in her eyes I am urged in His strength to be calm, stay silent Virtues like caring and sharing surprise us Now that chivalry is dead, modesty undressed Cycles of the heart are renewed by Love’s lesson As lithe children, we paused play to help one who tripped Since Sunday School we know the Good Samaritan Grown, we shelve these truths – recycle them for our kids Grown men and women still fall; we need a kind hand, An embrace … when Summer cycles to Autumn (Fall) Chins drop, hair falls … worse, there’s the ex-wife, ex-husband: Viola! Sun in the clouds – kind words make me recall - Heaven wants us to commune; with Love as backdrop We touch, we cringe, we blush … but Kindness can’t be stopped © Deo, 20170407

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Date: 4/8/2017 2:59:00 PM
Lisa, I cheated here. I took the other sonnet, and added some old feelings and new experiences, and viola! We have soup - poetry soup. Want to taste, anyone? (Just having fun).Shabbat shalom, A.Neil Deo
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Date: 4/8/2017 2:24:00 PM
Good Afternoon Anil. Hi. Oh my goodness the title is amazing and I see truth in those words. It can happen and it does happen. Love should always be and all should know of love however at times one can get hurt because of passion and enthusiasm. Your ending couplet is marvelous in thought and in theory. How beautiful of heaven and the backdrop of love. Have a wonderful evening Anil. Thank you for taking us on a journey. Well done.
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Date: 4/7/2017 7:54:00 PM
Amazing Anil! reader (me!) live every line...(seeing my ex & boyfriend in 2wks at my daughters wedding)... you know where to look for me...I'll be on the high road....
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Anil Deo
Date: 4/7/2017 9:46:00 PM
Shalom my dear Brother We at PS know U R walking in the light.May the Grace & Smile of Jesus dazzle those who have done U wrong.my daughters (28 & 25) are yet to marry. U are close to high hono, as a proud father who raised a lovely wife-to-be. the boyfriend can't match U. Walk w/ head among angels.Your broken heart grows B I G G E R! We'll be praying too

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