To Pink Or Not To Pink

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When I went to bed last night, my hair was fairer,
Yet, when I looked at the mirror today, a stranger was there,
More grey than fair, I’m eccentric, I’m a poet for 
Goodness’ sake, I say what I mean, and I mean I what I say,
So back to the hairdresser I am going today.
Some like it black, or red, even blue or green, my color is pink.
Chrisy, my dear, what have you done to my hair,
I wanted a whitish blonde, you are renowned for your flair. 
Light pink will blend in with mine and complement the blonde,
Please say you will fix my color and do my hair as I want.
I needed to tell hubby about what I had decided to do,
I think it will look great, he said, so out to dinner we went,
Happy I had my answer, to the question of ‘should I’.
What a wonderful night, it was as if we were out on a first date,
My husband and I, who is my best friend, lover and mate.
We dined under a full moon and millions of stars,
My pink hair shimmering, maybe they think hubby had 
Married the first alien woman from Venus or Mars,
I whispered this in my husband’s ear.  There’s my poet he replied.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/5/2024 1:16:00 PM
Aw, actually that looks good on you.
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Date: 7/2/2024 10:00:00 AM
Looks like I did read this creative/fun in the pink write. So are you from Venus or Mars??? Guess only your husband knows for sure. Hahaha!!! Hugs...  Have a blessed day writing away in your wonderful pink, Paula....................
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Date: 12/19/2023 3:59:00 AM
What a sweet couple you are. He agrees to all your weird whims. I visualize you looking all pink like an alien and giggling and exchanging pleasantries with your husband under the moonlit night. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/29/2023 6:09:00 AM
Love it~ Warren.
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Date: 10/2/2023 3:37:00 AM
Belated congrats on potw
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:02:00 PM
I can't believe I overlooked the opportunity to congratulate you, dear Jennifer, on your incredible achievement of being awarded Poem of the Week. Your poem, with its exquisite and meticulous composition, truly captivated my senses. The delicate hues of pastel pink, like a whimsical dance of colors, gracefully adorn you, enhancing your natural beauty. Your words, like a gentle breeze, carry an undeniable brilliance that radiates from within you, my dear friend. This prestigious accolade is a testament to your remarkable talent and unwavering dedication to the craft of poetry. Once again, I offer my heartfelt congratulations on this well-deserved recognition.
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Date: 8/18/2023 7:19:00 PM
Happy to see you with potw jen
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/19/2023 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Tom for visiting and commenting. Blessings Jen.
Date: 8/17/2023 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun ~ write/picture. A fun read. Pink looks great on you. Have a great day wearing pink.............
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/19/2023 8:20:00 AM
Thank- you Paula for all your lovely comments always. Be blessed and always well Jennifer
Date: 8/16/2023 5:50:00 AM
What a fun write Jennifer! Pink is my color this year (not my hair, just in general). Congratulations on this well-deserved POTW. :)
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Date: 8/15/2023 4:12:00 AM
My hair is almost solid grey now...but somehow, I don't think pink would work for me (but you wear it well). Congrats on POTW, Jenn. Hugs.
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Date: 8/14/2023 6:37:00 AM
Lovely write. Congrats and God bless you... Is your hair really pink? Love, Gina
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Date: 8/14/2023 6:00:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTW, Jennifer. Lovely discourse on hair color -- fun read.
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Date: 8/14/2023 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW Jennifer for such an entertaining tale! Debx
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Date: 8/13/2023 11:32:00 PM
A lovely colour and fun poem. Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
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Date: 8/13/2023 7:14:00 PM
Jennifer, pastel pink is a pretty/playful color, and it looks so good on you. You and your winds shine, my sweet friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/13/2023 11:43:00 AM
Such a fun read. Big congrats on your POTW! :)
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Date: 8/13/2023 10:54:00 AM
- He loves you no matter what color, dear Jenny - Congratulations on your p.o.t.w. :) - Take care :) - hugs
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Date: 8/13/2023 8:10:00 AM
Wonderful Jennifer ! I had to chuckle and grin at your experiences ! So much fun . A fav for me ! Your husband is one lucky guy ! A poet and a chameleon for a wife ! The pink is perfect for now ! Big hugs to you and congratulations on your POTW ! Love , Susan :)
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Date: 8/13/2023 8:08:00 AM
My friend, huge congratulations of receiving POTW award! This exceptional gem fully deserves it. Composed by a poet master imho. A gem and a new fav for me. God bless you.
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Date: 8/13/2023 6:54:00 AM
I have to FAV this one, Jennifer. It was so uplifting to hear of your brave change and the romantic result of the experience. Your date with your mate sounded like an enjoyable time. "Live,laugh,learn and Love", I like to say. I bet you're cute as a button! Hugs, Bill p.s. Congratulations on your POTW honor! I hadn't checked it yet but saw it below, in comments. Yeah! Enjoy another special day of recognition, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 8/13/2023 5:40:00 AM
what a witty poem Jennifer , many congrats on POTW - I steer clear of having colour done at the hairdressers they made such a pigs ear of it when I had it done for a birthday treat - never again lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2023 3:52:00 AM
Jennifer, a fun and entertaining poem, love the ending too! Congratulations on POTW!
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Date: 8/13/2023 3:25:00 AM
Jennifer I’ve been putting a pink toner on my hair for a while now, I love it and I get many people saying they like it, strangers who I’ve not spoken to before. I also use a silver shampoo and it gives my hair a violet glow. My hubby loves it too. Have enjoyed reading your poem, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Belle
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Date: 8/13/2023 3:03:00 AM
Back with congratulations Jennifer on the honour of POTW, congratulations. Tom
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Date: 8/12/2023 3:13:00 PM
Too cute Jennifer. This one left me with a smile. I see many women our age with pink or blue hair these days. One friend died hers deepest purple so that it looked dark with purple highlights. Let your muse fly. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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