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Poetry/Sonnet/To My Lost Love
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1562-116-16
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 16, 2023
For the International Contest, To The One I Lost
Sponsor, Anoucheka Gangabisson, Judged 08/16/2023

Third Place

The moment I met you it was true love, a sweetly perfect match in every way; we promised love until we went above, our wedding was such a magical day. I will never forget the wedding dance, all the people just faded in a mist; we were in a beautiful tranquil trance, I felt so loved as we embraced and kissed. Married life was wonderfully sublime, then, the unthinkable happened- you died; now our blessed divine love is lost in time, oh, darling for years and years I have cried. I go to your grave with tears each season; looking to the sky asking the reason.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/17/2023 12:29:00 PM

Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write again. Have a great day with your win............

Constance La France
Date: 8/18/2023 10:25:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and comment, blessings !

The Situation

Date: 7/26/2023 10:09:00 AM

I read this with. There was no marriage but I'm still in love. No grave but just the lake of the ozarks where her ashes were scattered. This reminder just shakes me.

Constance La France
Date: 7/27/2023 2:15:00 PM

TS, I am so sorry for your loss, we share that forever pain, thank you so much for reading my poem, even though it touched that sad part within you !

Jay Narain

Date: 7/16/2023 12:07:00 PM

Hi Constance, sorry for your loss. I feel it in my heart.

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:37:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the comment and compassion !

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/16/2023 11:07:00 AM

Hello Constance, i am sorry for your loss. He is watching over you. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/17/2023 4:23:00 AM

Hello Constance, You are welcome. Friendship & Love, /Darlene/

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:38:00 PM

Darlene, thank you so much for the comment and kind thoughts , love !

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/16/2023 10:05:00 AM

A wonderful write from a wonderful writer. Only a heart filled with love could write this amazing story. Your pain has been heavy but God feels each tear you shed from here below. I send you hugs. Have a good day..........................

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:39:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the compliment and sweet comment, hugs and blessings !

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 7/16/2023 7:49:00 AM

When death comes unexpectedly, Breaks hearth rapidly , Litters of tears falling brusquely. Memory saves internally. White dove flies highly Resting alone , lonnely Asking God , Why ? Why only me at young age? No answer from God. May God make away to easy pains. Losing a man you loved deeply , it is heavy thing to carry in life.

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 8:13:00 AM

Alfonso, thank you so much for the lovely comment, appreciate !