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To Follow God

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Lord, I revere you now and forever, I yearn for that manger of holy shrine Follow advice of the wicked never. Rather adore and laud you, my divine. I yearn for that manger of holy shrine Your ways are planted along flowing streams, Rather adore and laud you, my divine. So I know why I don’t deserve these dreams. Your ways are planted along flowing streams, Follow advice of the wicked never. So I know why I don’t deserve these dreams. Lord, I revere you now and forever,

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/8/2022 3:54:00 PM

now and forever... yes... Well written. I enjoyed your words... Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2022 3:09:00 PM

What a lovely way you chose to pay tribute to our Lord!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/18/2022 6:52:00 AM

A lovely Pantoum of faith Victor, simply divine… Belle

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/15/2022 10:58:00 PM

I Love and respect your faith, and poetry. Victor.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/15/2022 2:47:00 AM

Like a psalm that King David would write, all GLORY and PRaise to a Compassionate King, Mighty Savior, Our Prince of Peace. shalom, shalom

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/14/2022 11:11:00 PM

Soothing prayerful entreaty, I find pantoums tricky in as to get the concluding lines to make sense

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/14/2022 10:27:00 PM

I greatly enjoyed your beautiful pantoum, Victor.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/14/2022 7:16:00 PM

Your inspiration is one of God's gifts. You show you have his presence at all times. Hugs my friend

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2022 7:12:00 PM

Lovely words, Victor!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/14/2022 12:14:00 PM

I love the way you entrust yourself to His love so completely in this poem, beautiful rendition of what love should be, :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/14/2022 11:02:00 AM

Victor, this is an exceptionally well-written poem. A wonderful petition that has been composed in the style of an amazing pantoum.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/14/2022 9:53:00 AM

A pantoum in a prayer~beautifully done. :)Paulette

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/14/2022 8:44:00 AM

A prayer pantoum, brilliant, Victor:)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/14/2022 5:25:00 AM

Words of faith resonate in divinity--well crafted poem, Victor.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2022 4:38:00 AM

A beautiful prayer Victor written in pantoum form. Tom

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 5/14/2022 2:52:00 AM

Lovely prayerful moment for us to read and enjoy, amen....Delice

Valsa George

Date: 5/13/2022 9:17:00 PM

A lovely poem describing your abidance in God and avowing His superiority in your life. When we turn to God, peace and joy, we will come to experience ! A beautifully written Pantoum