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To Carry On

don't blow out the candle save your last breath for me light flickers an open window shadows hold near, her stare starlight's grace, midnight wishes longing to be found out  there steam rises, pasts rest the kettle whistles, a plead in whispers lain low kissed off with certain need moons drip over pools of time begging with the breeze to carry on as morning wakes, light breaks with the blue trapped inside of you words dance to seduction left, a message raps the door

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Date: 10/15/2017 6:46:00 PM
Looking at some photo albums, made me come back to this poem! well you know thinking of things that might have been.
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Date: 10/15/2017 5:12:00 PM
So beautiful Tim and romantic <3
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Date: 10/13/2017 3:20:00 PM
All these love poems lately, you'd think it was February! I love this, Tim! Well done :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 10/13/2017 2:41:00 PM
ohh, i like it a bit steamy and dreamy, tim... wonderful float of teasing words.. huggs
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Date: 10/13/2017 1:06:00 PM
Your work is so amazing, Tim. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:27:00 AM
I Love the second line I would give you a 7 if I could, but since I can't I'll give you a 10
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Date: 10/13/2017 2:19:00 AM
words dance to seduction, in the last flicker of the candle.... wonderful poem my friend.
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Date: 10/13/2017 2:06:00 AM
Possibilities bring anticipation. Lovely!
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Date: 10/12/2017 9:35:00 PM
Excellent Tim enjoyed reading my friend.
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Date: 10/12/2017 7:09:00 PM
absolutely breathtaking Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2017 3:01:00 PM
Very beautiful Tim, first and last verses amazing!
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Date: 10/12/2017 2:27:00 PM
All I needed to read to like this one was the second line, Tim. It gets the senses reeling.
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