To Be Where She Is

Ghosts have all but abandoned this lonely place. It's just me here. The cold, drizzling rain is relentless, yet calming somehow. Marble stones lodged in leafy pastures keep taunting me. Autumn was her favorite season; the rainbow of colors, the tantalizing smell of decay. Odd how beauty is most evident just before death. Feeling so drained. The park bench beneath the willow provides some respite. Branches sway in the breeze and caress my shoulders tenderly as if to comfort me. Before long I slip into a dream: 

A hummingbird, flitting before my eyes, wanting something from me. Holding out my hand in invitation it gently alights. Time stands still as we gaze into each other's soul, desperate for a sign. Then it happens. A solitary tear drops into my palm. Its warmth sends a chill down my spine. And then she's gone. 

I wake to the taste of salt upon my tongue. The rain has stopped, evening approaches. Time to return to my nest, as she has to hers. Why do I keep returning to this wretched haunt? There is hope where she dwells now. Her tear was for me, I'm sure of it. Loneliness is a kind of death. Death on two legs. How I dread the coming of winter. 

life in monochrome
crimson and tangerine dreams
to be where she is

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Date: 11/26/2024 3:35:00 PM
Reads like a ghost story and love lost but not forgotten. You are the master of this poetic form! Xo
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/26/2024 3:43:00 PM
Ooh thx so much!
Date: 8/22/2024 11:22:00 AM
I like this kind of writing you do here. It's not too long and it's quite descriptive, evoking the right emotion of melancholy
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/22/2024 1:12:00 PM
I try, especially on my Haibuns. Thx
Date: 6/18/2024 6:22:00 PM
Loved your word choice and the narrative.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/18/2024 7:01:00 PM
Thx Bea
Date: 1/15/2024 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/15/2024 3:00:00 PM
Gracias
Date: 12/14/2023 8:20:00 PM
Wow. Great stuff, Tom. Beautiful.
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/15/2023 5:31:00 AM
Thx Michele. Appreciated
Date: 12/3/2023 4:07:00 PM
This misted my eyes.Heartwrenching and beautiful ??
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/3/2023 4:10:00 PM
Is this our destiny? Who will go first? Tragic
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/3/2023 4:08:00 PM
Sorry the ?..Dont know what I pressed. :)
Date: 12/3/2023 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful emotional narrative that the heart feels. Enjoyed reading your halibun.
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/3/2023 9:22:00 AM
Thx so much Dennis
Date: 12/3/2023 1:42:00 AM
Firstly heartiest congratulations on receiving the well-deserved honour of POTD, dear Tom. I'm actually so happy for you! And again, sorry for noticing this so late.. I've always been a huge fan of your haibuns and this one really astounded my soul on many levels. Be it the elegance, richness, creativity, storytelling artistry or the captivating wordsmithery.. You've poured all the magical potions in these words! Also, I honestly would loveee to learn the art of writing haibuns from you someday!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/3/2023 6:02:00 AM
Sure and thx
Date: 12/1/2023 7:54:00 PM
How did I miss this beauty? So sorry Tommy, I usually keep up to date at least on POTDs, but I have been pretty busy lately, what with school concerts and so on. Congratulations though. So well deserved. Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/2/2023 4:53:00 AM
Thx so much Maria
Date: 12/1/2023 5:14:00 PM
All senses felt as I read your poem of the day, Tom. Belated Congratulations! As her beautiful favorite season Autumn ends, we hear the whispers of winter, how it nears. It's easy to get attached as this lonely bird did. May he find himself in the light, and never be alone again! Anaya
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/1/2023 6:34:00 PM
I was hoping you'd stop by. Thx much Anaya
Date: 11/30/2023 9:26:00 PM
The picture and the poem are equally haunting, dear Tom ! You have beautifully depicted the solitary charm and eerie ambiance of this place where the souls of the deceased haunt. A lovely poem and belated Congratulations on your POTD
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/1/2023 7:47:00 AM
Grateful for your visit Valsa
Date: 11/30/2023 7:22:00 AM
Tom, your work is exquisitely crafted. Congratulations on receiving the honor of POTD. Be blessed.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/30/2023 7:40:00 AM
Muchos gracias. I use only the finest materials :)
Date: 11/29/2023 10:49:00 AM
Tom, congratulations on your POTD! You have skillfully navigated both prose and poetry in your award winning haibun! The emotions of grief, the way you set the scene and used imagery is really over the top! This is a wonderfully composed and crafted poem. So happy for you! Enjoy your honor! Well deserved. Blessings!
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/29/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Sam, was hoping you'd stop by. Have a nice Wednesday
Date: 11/29/2023 6:56:00 AM
So beautiful. I love this. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/29/2023 6:59:00 AM
Much thx Gina
Date: 11/29/2023 2:41:00 AM
Good Morning Tom. Hello. This is just beautiful. Your words and thoughts touch the reader by making them feel. I very much love your title. Thank goodness for dreams and vivid thoughts. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. May this day find you well. Congratulations on POTD. May the poetic pen be with you always. Blessings and Peace (smile)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/29/2023 5:40:00 AM
Quite kind. Thx much
Date: 11/28/2023 6:48:00 PM
I love how you weave emotions, longing, seasons, and the passage of time Tom . Lovely, lonely and beckoning. Congratulations on POTD ! Susan :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/29/2023 5:40:00 AM
Grateful Susan
Date: 11/28/2023 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations Tom, on Poem of the Day. Your words always touch my heart, in some way.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 6:20:00 PM
That makes me smile
Date: 11/28/2023 2:46:00 PM
Nicely done, Tom. Congrats on Poem of the Day.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 2:49:00 PM
Thx mark
Date: 11/28/2023 2:19:00 PM
A very moving Haibun poem Tom, congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day. Belle
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/8/2024 7:23:00 PM
I’m mostly called Belle, which I prefer, so excuse the mistake… Beryl
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 2:50:00 PM
Thx Belle, er, Beryl
Date: 11/28/2023 1:34:00 PM
Stirring, sad and lovely. Congratulations on your POTD, Tom. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 1:47:00 PM
Yes ma'am and thx
Date: 11/28/2023 12:52:00 PM
Many congratulations Tom on your very worthy POTD. Such a moving piece. Beautifully, hauntingly written and poignant. A great, well crafted read. Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 1:24:00 PM
Thx. Glad you stopped by Christina
Date: 11/28/2023 11:10:00 AM
I also dread the coming of winter...and I never seem to be prepared for it. A very lovely and poignant piece, Tom. I love the pic, as well.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 11:16:00 AM
Thx for visit Jim
Date: 11/28/2023 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful, Tom! It is definitely worthy of POTD. Steven
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 9:59:00 AM
Thank you. I still think yours is better. Keep releasing my friend
Date: 11/28/2023 9:16:00 AM
Deep and moving poem, Tommy, Congratulations on POTD
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 9:17:00 AM
Thx Eve
Date: 11/28/2023 8:58:00 AM
Such a magnificent story Tom. Loneliness is a kind of death, is such a fantastic line and caps off the story so perfectly. Congratulations of the POTD, my friend.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/28/2023 9:02:00 AM
Good to see you at my stoop Jerry. Have a great day
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