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Timeless

We danced in a field of swaying daisies As if there is no time You smiled at me in a timeless moment A smile to last forever With a sweet melody in a breeze of whistling grass And our own humming Pearl white clouds passed us by in the blue sky Your soft touch remained with me I knew why, love can move all things around us In this creation we stand upon We see, we dance, move in step, securely together We know that our loving embrace is Part of all that is there, in a field of bright white daisies To re-visit, where it encompasses Fully who we are, safely, openly, your soul with mine In a moment so effortlessly We are together, connected, free, as it is precious It is timeless Heidi Sands 3/2/17

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Date: 3/19/2017 7:50:00 PM
Heidi Heidi Heidi. You have named this well. This entry is timeless. Your words are gentle and poetic. This is wonderful poetry. Well done throughout. I'm sorry it took me so long to return to your page.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/20/2017 7:42:00 AM
Hi Lisa. Thank you for this kind comment. I fully appreciate it and no need to apologize for timing coming back to the page. Have a nice day. :)
Date: 3/5/2017 9:15:00 AM
You really do write so beautifully! Tells me you have a tinder heart.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/5/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike. :)
Date: 3/3/2017 7:53:00 AM
Such a beautiful and moving poem Heidi straight from the heart it is wonderful another fav so in it goes.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/3/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Edward ! :)
Date: 3/2/2017 1:47:00 PM
great writing, very in sync and captured emotion
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thank You Michael! I appreciate your comment and nice feedback. :)
Date: 3/2/2017 1:33:00 PM
You captured your title perfectly, well done Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Charlie. I appreciate your comment. :)
Date: 3/2/2017 1:15:00 PM
Smooth as often :) Lovely on time read!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Date: 3/2/2017 9:22:00 AM
I so love daises and so love your poem sweet Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2017 10:20:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine :)
Date: 3/2/2017 8:53:00 AM
This was beautiful Heidi, such a soft and heart touching poem of happiness and love. This is how it should be. Beautiful my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2017 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris :)

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