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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The twilight paints a purple, starry bruise where time and trees hold their eternal truce. One ageless oak, with roots both gnarled and deep commands the night, its shadowed heart asleep. It’s boughs like clocks, and gears within its core mark rhythms slow where seasons fade and soar. Below, a river winds of gleaming sand, an hourglass undone by nature’s hand. And figures formed of starlight, frail and thin, rise from the grains, their silent pleas begin. The golden motes, like breaths within the air, dance ‘round the ruins, laid so stark and bare. Reminders of a world that turned to dust, while time, relentless, makes its steady thrust. The leaves like whispers tell of empires gone while through the ages, life and change roll on. Though empires rise and stars begin to fade, the ancient heart of earth will still be made. With gears of seasons, sand like hours spent, time, nature’s grand design, a life unbent.

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Date: 3/11/2024 6:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sara! Nice poem and matching photo. Bill
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Date: 3/8/2024 9:51:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/9/2024 6:51:00 AM
You’re most welcome and I am well thanks
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/9/2024 4:35:00 AM
thank you, Karen. You're so thoughtful. I am delighted with the placement. Hope you are well these days, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/8/2024 10:10:00 AM
Dear sara, your rhymes are so creative and unique, and I absolutely love the way youv written this, especially the opening lines truly left me in awe captivated by the beautiful way youv woven nature to express and depict time and what it means, to you, especially love the lines “ The twilight paints a purple, starry bruise where time and trees hold their eternal truce. One ageless oak, with roots both gnarled and deep commands the night, its shadowed heart asleep.“ just wow! Love that! Congratulations on your win in my contest, thank you for always supporting me, and also for trusting me with your poetic gem
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/8/2024 5:57:00 PM
Ink--you're so kind and complimentary. Grateful that you were captivated with the way I wove nature into my depiction of time. Your words mean a great deal to me as does the 2d place win! Thank you! I'm delighted to support you and will always trust you with my words. Your a trustworthy and soulful person :-) have a splendid weekend, dearest Ink, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/8/2024 9:43:00 AM
Loved it, Sara! "Reminders of a world that turned to dust, while time, relentless, makes its steady thrust. The leaves like whispers tell of empires gone while through the ages, life and change roll on." beautifully rhymed, you've captured time as a soulful tribute! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs~Anaya
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/8/2024 5:55:00 PM
thank you, sweet Anaya, for your visit and your complimentary words. Glad you found my poem soulful. I also appreciate yor congratulatory words. I'm delighted with my win in the contest. Hope you're well...have a great weekend, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 11:32:00 PM
What a wonderfully written piece and testament of your talent! I love the execution of ideas as well as the brilliant imagery and elegant presentation of your own personal style! Great job poetess Sara!
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/8/2024 9:50:00 PM
Aw you’re most welcome it is my pleasure
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/7/2024 4:46:00 AM
thank you, dear Karen. I do so appreciation your enthusiastic and heart-warming comments. I'm grateful for you and your consistent visits. They mean a great deal to me. hugs, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 4:59:00 PM
This is a masterpiece of exquisite beauty Sara, oh my goodness, it should be framed and presented in a museum amidst artifacts and paintings such as this photo shared with your poem. I am very much in awe of this incredible poem!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:28:00 PM
wow, BJ, your enthusiastic words are much appreciated. Your complimentary words meant a great deal to me. Thank you from my heart for your visit and meaningful words. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 2:57:00 PM
A stunning poem....enthralled and held captive in every line. The language is, well quite simply, delicious and sets the table for rhythms that are a treat for the ear. You keep the reader engaged from beginning to end. Be proud of this one Sara...
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:27:00 PM
wow, Paul, your comments touched me. I'm grateful that my poem and its rhythms are a treat for the ear. What a lovely comments. Thanks for your words telling me to be proud of this one. I was pleased with it for sure. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 12:22:00 PM
Brilliant penning. Love it and a sure winner. You are such a blessing to me :) Much love and prayers, Gina
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:25:00 PM
awww, thank you, Gina! I'm grateful for your kind words and to be blessing to you. You and your poems are a blessing to me as well. I glean much from reading them. You're an inspiration for sure, hugs and prayers, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 10:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this powerful "TIME" write with a great picture. "Good Luck" Have a blessed spring day.........................
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:24:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Paula, and for your well wishes. Have a blessed evening and spring, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 9:07:00 AM
Dear Sara, This is so nice. It takes us on journey through time and its eternity.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:24:00 PM
thank you, Jay, for your kind words. I appreciate your consistent visits and reads. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 7:52:00 AM
Wonderfully dwelling in relentless reign of time, Sara. Your images take the reader through ebb and flow of time. A splendid take on the theme.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:23:00 PM
thank you, Vijay! I appreciate your mindful and positive comments and for noticing the 'ebb and flow' of time. Have a pleasant evening, all my best, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 6:44:00 AM
This submission for the contest "Time" offers a truly mesmerizing exploration of the intertwining realms of time and nature, dear Sara. It reminds us that to comprehend the intricacies of time truly, we must venture into the remnants of ancient civilizations, including our own. Every line utilizes poetic language that captures the essence of soul. Your words and talent for invoking emotions are great. This heartfelt piece establishes a timeless bond between humanity and time. BOL in the contest
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:22:00 PM
thank you, dearest Sotto, for your in depth read of my poem and your mindful, insightful comments--which mean a great deal to me. Grateful you see that timeless bond between humanity and time. Have a wonderful evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 3/6/2024 5:11:00 AM
Dear Sara, This is a breathtaking journey through time and nature's eternal dance. Each line is imbued with a profound sense of beauty and depth, wonderful poetic words that captivate the soul. Your mastery of language and ability to evoke emotions is truly remarkable. This exquisite piece of art with the world. It is a timeless connection between humanity and the natural world. I hope you win. - Blessings Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/6/2024 5:20:00 PM
thank you dear Daniel--I always appreciate your in depth read of my poems and your insightful comments...and that's true with this visit. Your complimentary words are mean a great deal to me. I'm blessed with your visits. Have a blessed evening...Sara PS I, too, hope I place well in the contest.

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