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This Path We're On

You’re such a loving charmed romantic soul Feeling so blessed to have you in my life To tickle cuddle nibble and cajole It's very endearing to be your wife You turn each day to a celebration Joy is our day to day barometer You and I in it for the duration Clutching to passion's thermometer When chimes the melodic stroke of midnight Light sparkles green for a delightful kiss Appetite sweetly peckish for a bite In your arms tender times to reminisce Break open that chilled bottle of champagne We have nothing but romance on the brain AP: 1st place 2022 Submitted on July 7 2019 for contest BEST SONNET 2019 sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 5TH Originally posted on February 11, 2019

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/10/2019 7:09:00 PM

A truly time for champagne) Congrats, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2019 8:15:00 PM

Thanks for you much appreciated visit and comment, Kurt.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/10/2019 5:11:00 PM

Romantic sonnet Line, thanks and congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2019 8:30:00 PM

Thank you for my placement in your contest, John. Much appreciated.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/12/2019 2:40:00 PM

beautiful and very romantic, line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2019 6:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Ilene. Much appreciated.

Constance La France

Date: 2/12/2019 10:27:00 AM

Line, you have penned a sweet sonnet full of love. You are blessed to have this wonderful man.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2019 6:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Constance. Most appreciated.

Frances Schiavina

Date: 2/12/2019 9:38:00 AM

It's a beautiful bouquet of words for Valentine's day with the champagne sparkling the night.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2019 6:57:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Frances.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2019 7:59:00 AM

It always fills me with joy when I see a married couple so much in love, Line. A timely and uplifting romantic sonnet for Valentine's Day! Hugs, carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2019 6:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carolyn. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/12/2019 7:40:00 AM

Very romantic sonnet Line, sounds like you have the perfect partner. May the happiness continue for many years to come. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2019 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/11/2019 11:47:00 PM

I am so glad you have discovered your life's partner, and he has discovered you! "You turn each day to a celebration Joy is our day to day barometer" Nicely done, and on Valentines Week!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2019 6:40:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren. Congrats on marrying the love of your life too.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/11/2019 10:57:00 PM

Oh, this is so lovely and skillfully-written, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/11/2019 11:34:00 PM

Thank you, Janice, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.