Line Gauthier Poet Sonnet

This Path We're On

You’re such a loving charmed romantic soul
Feeling so blessed to have you in my life
To tickle cuddle nibble and cajole 
It's very endearing to be your wife

You turn each day to a celebration
Joy is our day to day barometer
You and I in it for the duration
Clutching to passion's thermometer

When chimes the melodic stroke of midnight
Light sparkles green for a delightful kiss
Appetite sweetly peckish for a bite 
In your arms tender times to reminisce

Break open that chilled bottle of champagne
We have nothing but romance on the brain



AP: 1st place 2022

Submitted on July 7 2019 for contest BEST SONNET 2019 sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 5TH

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Kurt Ravidas July 10, 2019 at 7:09 PM A truly time for champagne) Congrats, Line. Line Gauthier July 10, 2019 at 8:15 PM Thanks for you much appreciated visit and comment, Kurt.

John Hamilton July 10, 2019 at 5:11 PM Romantic sonnet Line, thanks and congrats! Line Gauthier July 10, 2019 at 8:30 PM Thank you for my placement in your contest, John. Much appreciated.

Ilene Bauer February 12, 2019 at 2:40 PM beautiful and very romantic, line! Line Gauthier February 12, 2019 at 6:56 PM Thank you so much, Ilene. Much appreciated.

Constance La France February 12, 2019 at 10:27 AM Line, you have penned a sweet sonnet full of love. You are blessed to have this wonderful man. Line Gauthier February 12, 2019 at 6:56 PM Thank you so much, Constance. Most appreciated.

Frances Schiavina February 12, 2019 at 9:38 AM It's a beautiful bouquet of words for Valentine's day with the champagne sparkling the night. Line Gauthier February 12, 2019 at 6:57 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Frances.

Carolyn Devonshire February 12, 2019 at 7:59 AM It always fills me with joy when I see a married couple so much in love, Line. A timely and uplifting romantic sonnet for Valentine's Day! Hugs, carolyn Line Gauthier February 12, 2019 at 6:57 PM Thank you so much, Carolyn. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham February 12, 2019 at 7:40 AM Very romantic sonnet Line, sounds like you have the perfect partner. May the happiness continue for many years to come. Tom. Line Gauthier February 12, 2019 at 7:43 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.

Caren Krutsinger February 11, 2019 at 11:47 PM I am so glad you have discovered your life's partner, and he has discovered you! "You turn each day to a celebration Joy is our day to day barometer" Nicely done, and on Valentines Week! Line Gauthier February 12, 2019 at 6:40 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren. Congrats on marrying the love of your life too.

Janice Canerdy February 11, 2019 at 10:57 PM Oh, this is so lovely and skillfully-written, Line! Janice Line Gauthier February 11, 2019 at 11:34 PM Thank you, Janice, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.