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Thunderstruck Sunshine

The clouds shook A thick, black, very wet blanket out In the Southeastern quadrant Of the New Mexico firmament, Complete with lightning And growling, crackling, Massive basso-profundo sound effects, Inviting the sun to rest, Take a load off, Reeellaaaxxx! Abrasively radiant, Helios glared a brilliant, heated, passionate, Steamy smile Into the arid monsoon skies And refused Storm’s invitation To lie down and go to bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2016 12:17:00 AM
Rev Rebecca, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 9/28/2012 8:51:00 AM
How charming and expressive i Powerful images: I can visualize the whole scene very well. And the very wit in the last verse...O, Reverend !:)
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Date: 4/11/2010 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Rebecca, a very effective Free Verse. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Rebecca. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 10:51:00 PM
Dear Rebecca, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:22:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 7/26/2009 4:04:00 AM
Love this work. I commented on another poem. I meant that the place described sounded too cold for me to want to go there. Sara
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Date: 6/11/2009 8:34:00 PM
exuberant, talented poetry!
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Date: 6/2/2009 6:19:00 PM
Brilliant, Brilliant! I see it all unfold before me. Masterfully written-AA
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