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Three Wishes:

To all the passing souls that end up above, May you rest now in peace in a greater love. Once you have passed the gates no longer ignored, For the first time, you'll understand what it is to be free, And may you guide the rest of us below to blind to see, Taking your place in heaven is your just reward, Keep your loving light on and you'll be more than adored, Just show your loving heart and no one shall disagree. Up there in the sky, Higher than the eagles fly, Is where you will spend your time, In the evermore, So keep your arms wide open, For one day I'll meet you there.
For Three Style III contest. Sponsored by: Laura Loo April~20~2017

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Date: 9/8/2017 11:09:00 AM
After I pass, I have made a date with my friend to go for the best coffee in history. I am not being frivolous. My friend has since passed and I look forward to meeting again. This poem has made me think of this date. WW thank you.
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Date: 5/16/2017 4:06:00 PM
Very nice Wolf. Congratulations on the recognition. Well deserved.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/8/2017 11:09:00 AM
Date: 5/14/2017 4:56:00 PM
Wonderful, White Wolf!!! I see why she liked it so much. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:01:00 AM
Such soulful wishes for those who go before us, White Wolf, and for us who will someday meet them again. Beautifully written and congratulations on your podium win in the contest. 7, Sandra
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Date: 5/13/2017 8:38:00 AM
Lovely, congrats!
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Date: 5/13/2017 12:47:00 AM
Congrats White Wolf to win on your wonderful poem
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White Wolf
Date: 5/13/2017 4:35:00 AM
Thank you /|\
Date: 5/12/2017 11:24:00 PM
Beautiful poem, White Wolf! Congrats on your win:)
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White Wolf
Date: 5/12/2017 11:26:00 PM
And the same to you, Laura /|\
Date: 5/12/2017 9:28:00 PM
WW...loved the rhyme scheme and rhythm! This was absolutely beautiful and moving. Thank you so much and be blessed! :) -luloo
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White Wolf
Date: 5/12/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, Laura /|\
Date: 4/20/2017 3:59:00 PM
Very heart-warming and uplifting sentiments and well-written, White Wolf. I enjoyed reading your poem and I offer best wishes for the contest! 7 Sandra
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White Wolf
Date: 4/20/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra! You are too kind /|\
Date: 4/20/2017 8:17:00 AM
Uplifting and inspiring dear, WW! A 7+ my friend, Good luck!
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White Wolf
Date: 4/20/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, Demetrios /|\
Date: 4/20/2017 8:17:00 AM
Good Evening White Wolf. What a beautiful and touching entry. My list of loved ones who have left us is growing each day. Thus you words are so uplifting and touch the heart. Honestly. Good luck with the contest. Well done entirely.
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White Wolf
Date: 4/20/2017 6:49:00 PM
I believe the soul is eternal and that we don't ever really lose anyone! As you know you can't create or destroy energy! And thank you for the good luck, I think I'll need it /|\
Date: 4/20/2017 2:42:00 AM
I love to think of all my loved ones, family and friends who have passed over waiting for me with open arms. A beautiful write White Wolf. #7
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White Wolf
Date: 4/20/2017 6:45:00 PM
I'm sure they will be, Elizabeth! Thank you for your review /|\
Date: 4/19/2017 3:23:00 PM
Lovely write :) xomo
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White Wolf
Date: 4/19/2017 5:10:00 PM
Thank you very much /|\
Date: 4/19/2017 1:00:00 PM
I love this beautiful poem, Budgie. I hope you end high in the contest! And I wish to meet you there, once, some day, just not yet if you don't mind :)
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White Wolf
Date: 4/19/2017 1:04:00 PM
No, I definitely don't mind! A time for everything /|\
Date: 4/19/2017 12:36:00 PM
A beautiful piece...hope to see you there
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White Wolf
Date: 4/19/2017 12:39:00 PM
In one form or another perhaps hey, Tim! /|\
Date: 4/19/2017 11:31:00 AM
Enjoyed this very much, WW!
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White Wolf
Date: 4/19/2017 11:34:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Kim! Enjoy your day /|\
Date: 4/19/2017 11:02:00 AM
This was beautiful my friend, touching and comforting and encouraging, to say the least. But I do have one question, how did you hijack Rick's account, because I never see him around here when it is daylight in my part of the world? :) Just kidding, nice to see you though.
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Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 12:59:00 PM
This bipolar madness produces wonderful poems, and great collaborations :)
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White Wolf
Date: 4/19/2017 11:10:00 AM
Haha! It's bipolar madness, sometimes I take my meds and they do nothing so it seems! I am running on fumes however at the moment! /|\

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