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Though I Be Unwelcome

Yearly - for a spell - I come calling, not unexpected. But there are times my travel may be slow. On such rare occasions when I’m late, you’ll look and see the mountains’ crowns remain uncovered, and in the valley, meadow grasses dance with gentle breezes, reveling in verdancy prolonged. Other times, I roll across the prairie bellowing. Assassin of startled vegetation, I wield a force God-given, and even dry terrain, where soil is sand, might feel the touch of my icy hand. And though I be unwelcome, I’m certain there’s a moment you look out on a pristine field where I have softly laid my eider down or to a street now silenced that strangely gleams in peaceful white. Or maybe you gaze up at stately mountains’ lovely snow-capped crowns, and in that tranquil moment, you are awed. For John Freeman's "the Pictures of winter Poetry Contest"

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Date: 11/1/2014 9:08:00 PM
Fabulous! but please snow there is no rush please be late. I love the way winter's arrival is represented here, every image unique with no cliches. Just Superb!
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Date: 9/25/2012 6:44:00 PM
Most beautifully crafted. Your descriptions are magnificent. Very picturesque! Bravo on being featured here this week and also on your win.
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:24:00 AM
It was a pleasant surprise to see your poem featured this week. Congrats.
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Date: 9/25/2012 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on this autumn special being chosen - the bitter with the sweet, the way it should be. Love, daver
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Date: 9/24/2012 3:10:00 PM
enjoyed this featured poem this week
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2012 9:17:00 PM
hey, this old one is being featured???
Date: 12/7/2011 12:08:00 AM
wow! What a pleasant write up. It was perfect. I look forward to be like you. Loved, adelaja
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:22:00 PM
Congrats Kiddo :-)
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Date: 12/6/2011 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 12/5/2011 10:31:00 PM
Wow Andrea. Love this being written in first person. A whole different perspective.
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:16:00 AM
Interesting write about that snow that is so beautiful but causes such problems for modern man...I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M..Thanks for stoppiing by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/9/2010 1:01:00 PM
Ah yes! Meant to be sung by a deep - basso profundo - voice. Old man winter, that old man winter, he don't .....Wait! Isn't there a song like that? Andrea, you bring out the music in my soul with your poetry.As for submitting more poetry. I'm trying to get my novel edited so I can find an agent.I am short of time. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:23:00 PM
the words in you poetry were so frigid that, the coldness flow is not understandable.why so cold? great poem. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/19/2010 6:16:00 PM
good write... enjoyed
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Date: 2/27/2010 11:24:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh HA! other than the use of "I" this is as close as you've come in my mind to Free Verse..and perhaps Unrequited of mine is now Blank verse ....should I fix the few none IAMBIC places & relabel?
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Date: 1/14/2010 3:35:00 AM
A very chilly write but then that is winter isn't it? Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 9:23:00 AM
Amazing piece! Mind lifting imagery, I really enjoyed this piece. It has been a pleasure meeting last week =) and I seek for a continued and growing friendship- edward
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Date: 1/8/2010 5:43:00 AM
Very much enjoy this tribute to the" assasin of startled vegetation" who "softly lays it's eider down".Well done personification of that schizophrenic old man winter, Andrea! Winner in my book and into my favs.-Robert..... by the way, Ike and Jane 'ppreciate y'alls comments, thank ya kindly an they'll be a thinkin an prayin for y'all as a new friend a theirs.
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:19:00 PM
Wow! what a piece Andrea, i wish you all the best with this fine entry into Laura's contest >> James
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Date: 1/2/2010 11:34:00 PM
A beautiful poem. I find winter a very bewitching season, the biting cold such a lulling beauty. Thanks for the poem, it was a wonderful read. Although I considered the contest, but seasonal change is more of a motif than the primary theme, I wrote it for my mother. Samir
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Date: 1/2/2010 11:43:00 AM
Sorry.. Winter Wonders is on Page 5 of my poetry list.. towards the bottom.. or u could type the title of my poem up at the top of the member page and hit the search button and it will bring up all poems with that title or close to it... I wrote it in October I think thats why its hard to find now... let me know if u have any success finding it.. and thankxxx for commenting on my W.H. Drama poem.. its my real life relationship at the moment.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/2/2010 10:49:00 AM
Another beautiful entry for Laura's contest... My entry is Winter Wonders if u care to read... great contests on Soup help our creative abilities to flow and flourish ... good luck also.. blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:23:00 AM
WOW! This is sooo beautiful, Andrea! What an excellent, and perfectly lovely view of winter! Best wishes....looks like a winner!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful write. It gave me a very peaceful feeling. Thanks.
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Date: 1/2/2010 7:27:00 AM
Another fabulous write Andrea...you have captured the essence of a winter storm so eloquently with your vivid imagery. There is nothing like looking out into the undisturbed scenes after a snow storm....or an ice storm! Good luck in the contest! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes..many thanks too for your always kind comments and wonderful words of encouragement. All is deeply appreciated! Have a glorious day~Mary
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