Those Old Cold Men of the Woods

Against a night frightened white, a tall tree stands - skeletal - transfixing me one winter on my woodland walk. Small trees surround the tall one. They extend icy fingers as if to help point me out to the taller tree. The hairs rise on my arms as I view the long black limbs of those old cold men of the woods reaching out for me. For the any poem contest #2 Poetry Contest
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Crisci Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea! I love your imagery, " transfixing me one winter on my woodland walk. " Its a profound sentiment as Nature unfolds itself before your eyes to show you its grand beauty. Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Best Wishes and hugs, Andrew.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Beautiful n very well penned! Congrats on win Andrea !!
May Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 6:29 PM
I enjoyed this lovely gem Andrea....congrats on your win
A  Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 9:32 AM
ANDREA, :) thanks you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
Duncan Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 2:55 AM
I like it, very good write,,,, did it win ? ;}
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 8:15 AM
it must have. I see some congrats down below.
Hunter Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Oh, you know I love this one, Andrea ... I would have liked to enter that contest. Gotta fav it
Bunton Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 7:04 PM
congratulations! Very Cool!
Merryman Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 3:00 PM
This was very descriptive, almost eerie. Congrats on your 1st place win, Andrea! Love, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 4:19 PM
Great descriptive and expressive work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats on your win..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Remind me not to go walking in the woods with you...lol....congrats on your BIG win. BG
Puddifoot Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 3:13 PM
congrats on a shared 1st place andrea, this is an impressive dodoitsu and it has a very sinister feel to it, I like the internal rhyme too :-)
Mossburg Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 9:59 AM
I love it. Very vivid and beautiful. I think trees are my favorite things in nature. They have life and energy which you capture so very well here. (and you have a "winter wooland walk" and you know how I like that.)
Mossburg Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:00 AM
P.S. congratulations on your win
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Wow congrats xx
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Russell's~ "Trees Everywhere" contest *Andrea*. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. These are just the types of writes Russell likes.
Mister Roboto Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 2:11 PM
"Skeletal"....Nice Take! BtW....HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 1:42 PM
I just love this one, Andrea.
Johnson Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 3:32 PM
Shiver me timbers. Short on time. Bye.
Williams Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 10:30 AM
SPOOKY...thanks for your comments, Yew trees were always planted in church yards, they have a huge religious meaning, that particular one is actually 1500 years old and you can fit 15 adults inside of it, it is that big..bye Petal...enjoy your Sunday..
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 10:03 AM
a different approach Andrea and eerie tones that make one enjoy the read and think twice about that walk in the woods.. luv the vocab here.. very impressive write.. will do well in Russell's contest luv.. luv the way u interspered the rhyme at times too.. wow..
Neels Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 8:57 AM
Wow, Andrea, I absolutely love this vivid piece and an appropriate title as well ;) all the best for Russell's contest ;) love Wilma
Devnath  Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Sometimes happens to many in the forest, it's a fearful situation but gone away, loved and enjoyed, always, bl
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 8:36 PM
All three dodoitsu writes displayed here are very descriptive. Russell should like them.
Goller Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 5:23 PM
A very nice expressed poem, nice images,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Vienna
Anish Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Reminds me of the Ents in the Lord of the Rings. Nice write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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