Darren White Poet Sonnet

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When we almost finished writing this poem, White Wolf got a phone call telling him he was now an UNCLE for the first time in his life. :) So I finished the poem, and posted it, also on his behalf

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Congratulations with little Macy, Budgie <3

This Willow Tree - a Collaboration With White Wolf

Evening gusts shall take away all my fear,
The stars will shine and fill my eyes with cheer,
The universe holds everything so dear
But you my love... How much I want you here

Lonely nights upon horizons I face,
To hold you again in this sacred place
I howl forlorn into the moonlit space
Where once we lay in our loving embrace

Weeping willows shall whistle in the glen,
As I lay silent with paper and pen
You left me, but I forgive you, again
The tree my witness, return to me, then....

     We grow our roots beneath this willow tree
     In sun and rain we will together be

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April 22, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White and White Wolf

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Darlene De Beaulieu August 13, 2017 at 12:28 PM This is great news that you became an uncle. I am happy for you. Also this is a great poem that you and White Wolf have written. You will be a good uncle my friend. Have a nice day.

Pin Dew May 1, 2017 at 3:46 AM Such a beautiful sonnet! :) Pin Dew May 1, 2017 at 3:53 AM :) "The White Brothers" :) Darren White May 1, 2017 at 3:48 AM Thank you so very much, we both love that sonnet too :)

Maria Williams April 24, 2017 at 12:59 AM What a wonderful poem Darren, two great minds coming together as one to create this masterpiece. My favorite form a sonnet, my favorite tree- everything about it is very much to my liking. xxx Darren White April 24, 2017 at 1:43 AM Maria, thank you. White Wolf loves sonnets as much as you do :) xxx

Roy Pett April 23, 2017 at 11:18 AM Absolutely brilliant poem, you are both so clever and talented and an inspiration to all poets new and old like me. :)) Darren White April 23, 2017 at 1:42 PM Thank you so much :) (Are you new and old? ;))... We love writing together and I guess you can see that in our poems.

White Wolf April 23, 2017 at 2:44 AM Thank you, Duir, you are a good friend! That's so nice of you! Darren White April 23, 2017 at 2:52 AM Always, my friend <3

Arthur Vaso April 22, 2017 at 10:51 PM Such a great collab and poem! You two shine! Darren White April 23, 2017 at 12:16 AM We absolutely love writing together, thanks Art :)

Carole Duet April 22, 2017 at 10:31 PM So beautiful and yet so sad. My heart wept like the willow while reading it. This is what I call REAL poetry. Anyone can read it and anyone can understand it. That's what I like. Love you two. Darren White April 22, 2017 at 11:39 PM Love you too Carole, and very happy you like it :)

Anil Deo April 22, 2017 at 10:10 PM above ground, weeping willow. Deep in earth, strong roots ... still growing, traveling, to springs of living water. i will pray that God adores your spirit, resilience, faith in loving ... You a blessing to so many. Arise and be healed, in Jesus Christ. amen Darren White April 22, 2017 at 11:39 PM Thank you so much :)

White Wolf April 22, 2017 at 6:31 PM The weeping willow, rowan, and oak are just a few of my favourite trees, but I hold a special place in my heart for the weeper! I'm off to visit my new niece today, they named her, Macy! Which is Old French for "Weapon!" Haha, gotta love that. Love ya bro ~~~/|\~~~ Darren White April 22, 2017 at 11:38 PM Macy is a wonderful name :D I didn't want to post it with the poem, not sure if you'd appreciate that, but now I will put it in the note under the willow :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 22, 2017 at 1:12 PM A wonderful pair of pens you two :) xomo! Darren White April 22, 2017 at 1:26 PM Merci ma mo :)

Miraj Raha April 22, 2017 at 12:58 PM Just magnificent!!! Written with great intensity and enthusiasm. An instant classic. It was really an honor to read a collab from you Darren and WW.And thanks for the pic, it was a special addition. Darren White April 22, 2017 at 1:06 PM Thank you so much Miraj. It was asalways a pleasure to write with White Wolf. Thank you for your always so wonderful comments.

Eileen Manassian April 22, 2017 at 10:59 AM Great collab! The willow is my favorite tree....You have done superbly well. Darren White April 22, 2017 at 11:37 AM I love willow trees too, they are beautiful :) Thank you Eileen.

Elizabeth Kinch April 22, 2017 at 8:51 AM Darren and WW a stunning collaboration producing a magnificent poem. #7 Darren White April 22, 2017 at 9:33 AM Elizabeth, thank you :)

Tim Smith April 22, 2017 at 8:00 AM Wow, what a tremendous collaboration...The Willow will remember...A fav Darren White April 22, 2017 at 8:07 AM Yeah :) It was great to write this together. Thank you for the fav, Tim :)

Lisa Ricci April 22, 2017 at 7:32 AM Good Afternoon Darren and White Wolf too. My goodness. I believe the tree will hold many secrets the most precious and wondrous ones. You can count on that. And yes, the roots of love and life will grow. This entry is top level poetry in every way. All elements are present. Congratulations to you both on your collaboration. This was an honor to read. Have a wonderful day and may long live the willow tree. Darren White April 22, 2017 at 7:54 AM Thank you Lisa. We like writing poems together very much, and we have a lot of fun in doing so :)

Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2017 at 7:25 AM Nature has curative properties! A lovely poem! Darren White April 22, 2017 at 7:52 AM Thank you, Kim :)

Amy Sullivan April 22, 2017 at 7:08 AM Absolutely Stunning! Loved it! Darren White April 22, 2017 at 7:16 AM Thank you so very much :)