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When we almost finished writing this poem, White Wolf got a phone call telling him he was now an UNCLE for the first time in his life. :) So I finished the poem, and posted it, also on his behalf


Congratulations with little Macy, Budgie <3

This Willow Tree - a Collaboration With White Wolf

Evening gusts shall take away all my fear,
The stars will shine and fill my eyes with cheer,
The universe holds everything so dear
But you my love... How much I want you here

Lonely nights upon horizons I face,
To hold you again in this sacred place
I howl forlorn into the moonlit space
Where once we lay in our loving embrace

Weeping willows shall whistle in the glen,
As I lay silent with paper and pen
You left me, but I forgive you, again
The tree my witness, return to me, then....

     We grow our roots beneath this willow tree
     In sun and rain we will together be

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April 22, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White and White Wolf

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/13/2017 12:28:00 PM
This is great news that you became an uncle. I am happy for you. Also this is a great poem that you and White Wolf have written. You will be a good uncle my friend. Have a nice day.
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Date: 5/1/2017 3:46:00 AM
Such a beautiful sonnet! :)
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Pin Dew
Date: 5/1/2017 3:53:00 AM
:) "The White Brothers" :)
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Darren White
Date: 5/1/2017 3:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much, we both love that sonnet too :)
Date: 4/24/2017 12:59:00 AM
What a wonderful poem Darren, two great minds coming together as one to create this masterpiece. My favorite form a sonnet, my favorite tree- everything about it is very much to my liking. xxx
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Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 1:43:00 AM
Maria, thank you. White Wolf loves sonnets as much as you do :) xxx
Date: 4/23/2017 11:18:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant poem, you are both so clever and talented and an inspiration to all poets new and old like me. :))
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 1:42:00 PM
Thank you so much :) (Are you new and old? ;))... We love writing together and I guess you can see that in our poems.
Date: 4/23/2017 2:44:00 AM
Thank you, Duir, you are a good friend! That's so nice of you!
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 2:52:00 AM
Always, my friend <3
Date: 4/22/2017 10:51:00 PM
Such a great collab and poem! You two shine!
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Darren White
Date: 4/23/2017 12:16:00 AM
We absolutely love writing together, thanks Art :)
Date: 4/22/2017 10:31:00 PM
So beautiful and yet so sad. My heart wept like the willow while reading it. This is what I call REAL poetry. Anyone can read it and anyone can understand it. That's what I like. Love you two.
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 11:39:00 PM
Love you too Carole, and very happy you like it :)
Date: 4/22/2017 10:10:00 PM
above ground, weeping willow. Deep in earth, strong roots ... still growing, traveling, to springs of living water. i will pray that God adores your spirit, resilience, faith in loving ... You a blessing to so many. Arise and be healed, in Jesus Christ. amen
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 11:39:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 4/22/2017 6:31:00 PM
The weeping willow, rowan, and oak are just a few of my favourite trees, but I hold a special place in my heart for the weeper! I'm off to visit my new niece today, they named her, Macy! Which is Old French for "Weapon!" Haha, gotta love that. Love ya bro ~~~/|\~~~
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 11:38:00 PM
Macy is a wonderful name :D I didn't want to post it with the poem, not sure if you'd appreciate that, but now I will put it in the note under the willow :)
Date: 4/22/2017 1:12:00 PM
A wonderful pair of pens you two :) xomo!
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 1:26:00 PM
Merci ma mo :)
Date: 4/22/2017 12:58:00 PM
Just magnificent!!! Written with great intensity and enthusiasm. An instant classic. It was really an honor to read a collab from you Darren and WW.And thanks for the pic, it was a special addition.
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Miraj. It was asalways a pleasure to write with White Wolf. Thank you for your always so wonderful comments.
Date: 4/22/2017 10:59:00 AM
Great collab! The willow is my favorite tree....You have done superbly well.
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 11:37:00 AM
I love willow trees too, they are beautiful :) Thank you Eileen.
Date: 4/22/2017 8:51:00 AM
Darren and WW a stunning collaboration producing a magnificent poem. #7
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 9:33:00 AM
Elizabeth, thank you :)
Date: 4/22/2017 8:00:00 AM
Wow, what a tremendous collaboration...The Willow will remember...A fav
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 8:07:00 AM
Yeah :) It was great to write this together. Thank you for the fav, Tim :)
Date: 4/22/2017 7:32:00 AM
Good Afternoon Darren and White Wolf too. My goodness. I believe the tree will hold many secrets the most precious and wondrous ones. You can count on that. And yes, the roots of love and life will grow. This entry is top level poetry in every way. All elements are present. Congratulations to you both on your collaboration. This was an honor to read. Have a wonderful day and may long live the willow tree.
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Lisa. We like writing poems together very much, and we have a lot of fun in doing so :)
Date: 4/22/2017 7:25:00 AM
Nature has curative properties! A lovely poem!
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 4/22/2017 7:08:00 AM
Absolutely Stunning! Loved it!
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Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much :)
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