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This Truth, I Feel

Your headstone glistens neath the sky
   this breezy, chilly, autumn day,
      as dead leaves swirl in circles now
while falling, landing where you lay.

This tree that guards you- soon must sleep;
   once lush with earthly, verdant green,
     lies dormant while its leaves decay,
and roots face their long, wintry scene.

Now, with these roots, asleep you rest.
   Although the sky is clear and blue,
      I dread this force, known as decay-
felt deeply neath this tree with you.

Yet- from decay, new spring is born-
   from death to life, the cycle goes.
      This truth I feel- so, as I grieve-
know life has sprung from your repose.


September 21, 2020

Contest: Writing Challenge - Decay
Sponsor: Constance La France
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Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 5:51 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Sad , but lovely canvas you've written, Sandra. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Ermine Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 3:38 PM
An incredibly well drawn poem, Sandra. Perfect meter. An absolute joy to absorb. Last verse realisation and acceptance drawn so beautifully. My warmest Congratulations for your First Place Win.!!
La France Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, and a great image too _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. So sad but true. Enjoy your win and day writing away................
Fowler Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 11:00 AM
So very touching Sandra. Nice showing of the death-life cycle. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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