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This Sweet Little Thing

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Submissive to our desires this quiet epitaph we call the soul withholds us mind, body and heart it joyfully contains and aligns us to our greatest aspirations and dreams inside us, the soul journals our progress through accurate Akashic records never to be erased, it observes destiny's groove This sweet little thing we call the soul, is always present in our lives, keeping us wondrously both human and alive. The soul, it cannot be divided for it is here to teach us creationism it was there the day we were born and it will be there, until the day we die. December 25 2022

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2022 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely/wonderful write. Love your line, "it was there the day we were born and it will be there, until the day we die." So true. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................

Constance La France

Date: 12/27/2022 9:29:00 AM

Mystic, a wonderful poem, and congratulations on your win in Seeker's contest, well done, blessings

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/26/2022 6:11:00 AM

For sure, the very think that makes us individual. And indeed is the record of our never-ending-journey. Oh were science able to weigh things correctly, finally coming to the conclusion that spirit is real an substantive. Well said. A wealth of feeling information.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/27/2022 7:34:00 AM

the most substantial part of us is light and invisible but it does its charming work Joe. Thanks for your visit

Deb M

Date: 12/25/2022 7:14:00 PM

Most important part of us…lovely poem and so very true Rose! Debx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/26/2022 3:34:00 AM

It is indeed Deb, the part of us that sits quietly and awaits our emotions, its the reciprocal our well being. Thank you for reading, Merry Christmas