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They said you may not make it, They said it couldn’t be. You may not leave the hospital, May never come home with me. A baby born this soon, Is too small to make a sound. So, don’t expect to hear him cry, Like the healthy babies around. You showed them from that moment That you had other plans. You came into the world crying, Kicking, moving your hands. Then, they said it would be tough, And they couldn’t have been more right, But you proved you were strong enough And showed how you could fight. They said your brain was damaged, You may never talk, or see. But, now you babble for hours, And quickly reach for me. They said you may not walk, Or ever learn to crawl, And I can’t keep from smiling, As you disprove them all. They that said it was doubtful You would walk away untouched. But I stayed ever hopeful, For the child I loved so much. See, Mommy never doubted, I knew right from the start. My thoughts were often clouded, But I listened with my heart. I heard a constant voice Saying, “It’s not up to them Hold strong your faith, I have a plan, And a special one for him.” You are child of God, A miracle from above. Sent to prove His mercy, And the power of His love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2011 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lay's "My Children" contest Melody. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:16:00 PM
:-) Me again. Umm, lol, apparently you are in good company. Went to the website you posted. Your tale is so heartwarming and your son is certainly a miracle. My daughter, after 16 years of infertility, is mine. But that is a different story for a different time. Congrats on the win and hope to read more of you! Take care, Cyndi. PS, Trevor is adorable!
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:05:00 PM
Melody, two things. The first, I think this is a truly amazing poem and it deserves to be in first place. Second, this is going to sound odd, but I took a writing course years ago with a wonderful teacher...her name? Melody Campbell! Are you in Ontario? Was that you? If so, I have to say that because of you, I've been published several times...novel still in the works. If you're a different Melody, pardon my ramble and that being said, my teacher was an amazing person, warm and inspiring. :-)
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Date: 6/24/2011 12:10:00 PM
A poem so tender, what only a mother can feel..keeping faith can work towards miracles happening. God bless your son..Many Congrats on your well deserved 1st place in this contest...love, gautami
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Date: 6/23/2011 11:11:00 PM
Its a beautiful write straight from the heart of a mother. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:57:00 PM
Wow! Thank you all SO much! This is my first time to enter a poetry contest. I am so honored to have my poem chosen as 1st place! My sons name is Trevor. I wrote this for him. If you would like to see photos and read his story you may do so at www.trevorwadecampbell.weebly.com Again, thank you, for alll of your kind words!
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:44:00 PM
I am so happy that he proved them wrong. Congratulations for your win with this expression of mother love. Love, Joyce
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Melody Campbell
Date: 6/23/2011 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Joyce!
Date: 6/23/2011 5:48:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win in My Children, well deserved, it gave me tears, how old is your miracle now? is he still proving them wrong? this is an amazing poem...Love Randa
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Melody Campbell
Date: 6/23/2011 10:03:00 PM
Thank you, Randa. Trevor is now 20 months old and still prving them wrong everyday! www.trevorwadecampbell.weebly.com
Date: 6/23/2011 5:44:00 PM
I am so glad to know they were proved wrong...'when they said' ........ !! What a wonderful poem of love!
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Melody Campbell
Date: 6/23/2011 10:03:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/23/2011 5:43:00 PM
Congrats Melody on your first place win in the children contest with this touching tender and sensitive story .. enjoy top spot for top notch poetry luv..
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Melody Campbell
Date: 6/23/2011 10:04:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 6/23/2011 5:36:00 PM
Yup a fantastic story and a winning child and Mom who better to be in first place!! Congrad's Light & Love [what's the boys name dear?]
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Melody Campbell
Date: 6/23/2011 10:04:00 PM
Thank you! His name is Trevor. His story and pictures is at www.trevorwadecampbell.weebly.com
Date: 6/23/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win and your incredible spirit. Luv Lay!
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Melody Campbell
Date: 6/23/2011 10:05:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/17/2011 12:50:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Melody. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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