These Hands

These hands have known the joys of a boy’s youthful play
Also known the farm work that was required each and every day
These hands pulled the weeds from the fields where we toiled
Laboring under a blazing sun; leaving these hands rough and soiled
These hands held the hand of my lady as I asked her to share my life
Held her by my side the day she became my wife
These hands reveal the ravages; of weather’s savage breathe
Held a knife in the flowing blood; in a beasts ultimate death
Hands that held many a hammer; swung too hard; swung too long
Time has taken its toll on these old hands; hands that once were so strong
These hands proudly rocked the cradle as I watched my babies sleep
Held them closely to my chest to calm some hurt causing them to weep
These hands gently pushed a child’s swing; as my children laughed aloud
Held a daughter's hand walking down the aisle, made her father proud
These hands have known the heat of a sculptor’s flaming torch
Held brush and pallet while painting out upon the porch
Cradled my pen as I spread the ink in the poetry that I write
Ink that is sometimes spread well into the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Murray Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 6:56 PM
I look at my hands and see my mother. Eyes are not the only window to the soul.
Gulley Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 3:35 PM
A belated congrats on this fine win. A 7 for me and a Fav.
Gulley Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 3:34 PM
This write just pulled me in and held me tight word for word. I could see everything you spoke of so clearly as if I was there. What a great journey into your world. Thanks for sharing this awesome write and I enjoy the wonderful pen ink you spend well into the nights. A 7 for me and a FAV.....Sharon :)
Bennett Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Thank you so much for taking time to view a few of my writes and for your much appreciated words for they mean the world to me.
A   Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Donald,, congratulations with your winning poem... Always~ Linda
Mehta Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Congrats on a nice win in the contest, Donald
Ayala Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:32 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
Johnson Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 9:48 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
Konos Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Hey Everyone! When I said 'Off you go now' I didn't know you were totally going to blow my mind, not all of you at once! I am honored to have read your poetry. Thank You for entering my contest! Off You Go Now, Judy
Lindley Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 8:37 PM
You truly slay with this fine write! Giving it a solid 7 and adding it to my fav list. I simply cannot pick a single favorite verse because they all are so fine....
Bennett Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 10:10 PM
Robert; I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this piece. That really means a lot to me.
Deschler Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Our hands can hold many precious things, our memories just being one of them.... This is a truly beautiful write, Donald. Your hands have painted a masterpiece here! Wonderful work!
Bennett Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Kelly; I really appreciate you taking the time to drop by and read and comment on my work. Your kind words means a lot to me.
Nehls Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:42 AM
This is a very good poem, Donald. The hands are an extension of the soul and tell a lot about a person. Sometimes I just like to observe people as they work or at play with their children, We can learn much about someone just by the way they use their hands. This is a fine poem about your soul, my friend. Truly enjoyed it.... Robert.
Bennett Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 11:28 PM
I apologize for taking so long to reply but for some reason my Soup mail was routing into my deleted file unread. So thank you for dropping by and commenting on my work.
Kearley Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 1:42 AM
This is going to my favorites... It's perfect!
Bennett Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:33 PM
Dan; I really appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my work. Thank you.
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