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chool Shootings Have Already Killed Dozens in 2018

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These are the days that test the heart when those tightly shut doors open, revealing treasures once hard sought with its pleasures gone, unspoken. These are the days that tempt the faith in a violent angry voice and suddenly a life's at stake with no privilege of a choice. These are the days that see death’s reign unexpectedly anyplace, while parent’s eyes bleed tears of pain for a traumatized living race. These are the days of stolen joy in a second’s sudden laughter most pleasing of all human noise as sorrowful sighs come after. 6/6/18 Iambic tetrameter Favorite Poem Written In June 2018 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

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Date: 7/27/2018 5:28:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. :)
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:21:00 PM
Sian, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful write, well done !
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:30:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Sian. Congrats on your win! Charlie
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Date: 7/24/2018 8:40:00 PM
So sorry I missed reading your well-written, intense poem before, Sian. Yes, 'These are the days of stolen joy in a second’s sudden laughter'...you have imaged this frightening awareness so well. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/14/2018 8:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sian. Beautiful poem; I like the juxtaposition of the bad and good things.
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Date: 6/13/2018 9:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win! An awesome write, profound. Sums up these days as real as can be. Well done!
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Date: 6/13/2018 2:43:00 PM
such a beautiful poem Sian, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your thoughts on this theme, Well done, SuZ
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Date: 6/12/2018 4:25:00 AM
This is beautiful Sian, from beginning to end. Congratulations on your Trophy win!
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Date: 6/11/2018 8:38:00 PM
Nicely done , Sian, congratulations on your win.. Hugs eve
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Date: 6/11/2018 5:35:00 PM
Excellent.! Congratulations for your top win Sian! :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 2:02:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first place, Sian - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/11/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thanks and blessings.
Date: 6/11/2018 1:52:00 PM
Congrats Janice on a fabulous winning poem, I enjoyed it immensely, a worthy winner for sure!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/11/2018 2:48:00 PM
Appreciate your comments John.
Date: 6/11/2018 1:45:00 PM
Congrats Sian on your top win with this great poem xxoo
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/11/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Mike.
Date: 6/11/2018 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations Janice on your first place entry. I love the content and the structure. Well done!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/11/2018 2:49:00 PM
You are a gem Daniel for your great consideration of my entry. Good contest ideas and the songs were inspirational. Thanks.

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