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There Are Days

There are days I write submitting my thoughts onto pages doubting time investing into memories there are times I am numb baffled bewildered where unthinkable masterpieces are created in the aftermath of my minds tolerance for thinking nothing at all in the blink of an eye the escaping of a whisper sound removed remembering a time I simply wrote me

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Date: 1/23/2023 12:34:00 PM
Hello Yolanda, oh such a beutiful poem. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/24/2023 4:07:00 PM
Hello Yolanda, You are welcome. I hope all is well with you. wishing you the best for the New Year. Hugs.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 1/24/2023 3:04:00 PM
awww so sweet thank you many blessings.. sending hugs
Date: 1/9/2023 12:52:00 PM
Wonderful write with a great ending. Have a wonderful day....................
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 1/24/2023 3:05:00 PM
thanks a bunch ..sending hugs
Date: 10/31/2022 7:29:00 PM
Stream of consciousness? I like how ... When "doubting," we do create masterpieces. Effortlessly
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 11/11/2022 2:36:00 AM
thank you best wishes
Date: 10/30/2022 9:29:00 AM
This is beautiful, Yolanda. So many lovely lines, I can't pick one I love best! :)
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 1/24/2023 3:05:00 PM
thank you so much sweetie.. sending hugs
Date: 10/15/2022 10:13:00 AM
Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/30/2022 4:02:00 AM
thanks a bunch
Date: 10/15/2022 8:25:00 AM
Outstanding poem and concept. On rare occasions, the more we try, the harder it becomes to write anything, and suddenly, wham! It bubbles to the surface when my mind is wandering. Composing is unusual in that respect; there are usually plenty of things happening. Thanks for your comment on my page.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/30/2022 4:01:00 AM
thank you very kindly sir.
Date: 10/15/2022 8:23:00 AM
The muse comes and goes. Everyone gets a writer's block but patience and writing even a few lines will help.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/30/2022 4:02:00 AM
thank you
Date: 10/15/2022 8:15:00 AM
I'm glad you set aside doubt and captured this one on the page - enjoyed! Sometimes, the harder I try, the harder it is to pen anything, and then, poof! I'm not thinking, and out it pours. Writing is weird, that way - definitely a lot going on in the background.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 10/30/2022 4:02:00 AM
thank you warm wishes to you

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