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There Ain't No Double Trouble

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I introduce you to a dusty stranger who sidled up to me, his pockets and glass seemingly as empty as his promises. Yet, amidst his claims of poverty, there's a glint in his eye and a strange request. Prepare to be discombobulated with whimsical charm, wit, mystery, and twisting imagery by the enigma. Through the lens of this peculiar exchange, the poem explores themes of identity, perspective, and the complexities of human connection. Come with me as the narrative takes off, and we are drawn deeper into the intricate dance of words, leaving us bamboozled, puzzled, and delighted by this stranger.

- Blessings,
Daniel Henry Rodgers

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A feller I met with a twinkle in his eye Quite the enigma you see. Said, "I ain't got no dough... not a single penny!" Said he, "ain't got no cash... not a single plug for a cup o' tea." "Couldn't buy you no drink / not even a dime's worth of time Wouldn't dare ask you for no drink in my silly whine." "Never saw nothin' finer... not a sight to behold Then, your fancy top hat... not plated with gold. In this fine conversation... though, I confess, I don't know nothin' much... not more or less." "Don't know nothin' much 'bout music... not a single note But begged the whole bar not to leave me croak In this sea of confusion... though- I confess I ain't got no answers, not more or less." Confused, I just stared / mouth agape and wide "So are you broke or not?" I finally couldn't hide. He winked / then chuckled / a sly knowing grin "Don't you fret none... my friend / I ain't never givin' in!" "Never learned nothin' clever / that ain't no surprise But I sure ain't unhappy, not with tears in my eyes!" A poet / a pauper / a prince; his stories spun gold Ain't nothin' like his tales / never gettin' old. We made a bond that don't nobody understand A friendship ain't never been seen in no other land.

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Gregory Colodub

Date: 5/4/2024 1:10:00 PM

What a deep poem, Daniel! It does seem that you met an alter ego here, that's why your interlocutor looked strange and close at the same time.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 5/6/2024 6:33:00 AM

Hello Gregory, Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. They say that us Geminis have altered egos. LOL! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/1/2024 2:47:00 PM

very intriguing write Daniel we have to remain open to new people who are often a little odd we can learn so much from them hugs Shadow

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 5/1/2024 4:45:00 PM

Dear Shadow, your understanding of the complexities within my words touches me deeply. Indeed, embracing the uniqueness of others can lead to profound growth. Your wisdom radiates through your comment, reminding us all of the richness found in diversity. Hugs back to you, my friend. - Blessings, Daniel

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/30/2024 11:14:00 AM

Daniel, this could be an allegory for this whole crazy website of strange poets...at least I consider myself a bit odd. We can all appreciate each other no matter how different we are. While I have not had the chance to meet anyone from PS, I suspect we would all have a fabulous time. There are some great stories here and a lot of wonderful people here and in this world at large if we would take the trouble to just listen.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 5/1/2024 7:46:00 AM

Dear Duke, Indeed, the diverse array of voices and perspectives here mirrors the beautiful days of humanity itself. It is so true that we need to appreciate each other's uniqueness which is a powerful reminder of the value of empathy and understanding. Let's continue to cherish the stories and connections we find here, and may we always be open to listening and learning from one another. - Blessings, Duke, - Daniel

Kelli White

Date: 4/17/2024 3:47:00 AM

I remember a panhandler I met once in a wheelchair in Boston. As soon as his cup was full of change he pulled the brace off his leg and abandoned the wheelchair, very amusing poem, Kelli

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/17/2024 7:24:00 AM

Dear Kelli, It is interesting because I see many of these individuals here in Philadelphia that I know are not homeless. Thanks for stopping by. - Blessings, Daniel

Bill Baker

Date: 4/12/2024 6:04:00 PM

A very entertaining tale, Daniel. I've met a few along the way that could be related to this one. They could spin the tales, because they'd traveled so many tails. Thanks for sharing this fun read, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/13/2024 5:08:00 AM

Dear Bill, your feedback brings a smile to my face! I'm glad you found the tale entertaining and could relate it to some of your own experiences. Your support means a lot to me. Thank you for your kind words and blessings. Wishing you many more smiles, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2024 2:39:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun/creative ~ write/story. Great Ending... Have a fun day writing away.................

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/11/2024 6:11:00 PM

Dear Paula, I believe my greatest joy in writing is wonderful comments like your. Thank you my friend! - Blessings, Daniel

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/10/2024 11:06:00 PM

What an intriguing tale. Loved the explanation at the beginning, and the smooth conversion that follows. This man surely has a storehouse of tales to give one pause for thought. Great writing! Loved your choice of words. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/11/2024 7:22:00 AM

Dear Eileen, Thank you so much for your thoughtful words! I'm glad you found the tale intriguing and enjoyed the transition throughout the story. It's always a pleasure to share and receive feedback. Your appreciation means a lot. Looking forward to more exchanges in the future! - Blessings, Daniel

Regina Elliott

Date: 4/10/2024 2:06:00 PM

Hi Daniel, this wondrous story reminds me of the true story of a humble and quiet janitor at a U.S. high school or college, I don't remember which state or town. He was overlooked by some students. But a small group of students struck up a conversation with him, and found out with their friendly conversation with him that he was a Medal Of Honor recipient veteran. Amazing story you've penned here. Blessings to you, good poetry friend.~

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/11/2024 7:20:00 AM

Dear Regina, your touching anecdote adds depth to the poem's theme of hidden greatness. It's a reminder to cherish every interaction, for within the quietest souls often lie the most extraordinary stories. Thank you for sharing and for your kind words! - Blessings, Daniel

Lin Lane

Date: 4/10/2024 9:43:00 AM

This feller may or may not be able to buy a round of drinks, but he's not poor. He's richly blessed with knowing how to tell a tale (as do you). I'm late to your party but wanted to stop by to leave you my thoughts and well wishes.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/10/2024 10:29:00 AM

Dearest Lin, your thoughtful words warm my heart. Thank you for your generous praise and for taking the time to share your thoughts. Your kindness is a treasure, and your presence at my poetic gathering is a joyous gift. Wishing you continued inspiration and blessings on your own creative journey. - Blessings, Daniel

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/10/2024 1:35:00 AM

We must always keep our friendships strong. A great poem that makes me wonder why some poets reject friendship.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/10/2024 4:16:00 AM

Thank You, Victor, for your visit and comments. Friendship is a very tricky thing, and each individual has so many nuances. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Robert Schatz

Date: 4/9/2024 8:20:00 PM

I love how it's mainly dialogue until the last verse, where the story teller makes his observations of the tale. Some wonderful turns-of-phrase and rhymes. In general, it's such a fun poem. (It's cool how, after beginning the third line with "Said," you begin rather than end the fourth line with "Said he.")

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/10/2024 4:14:00 AM

Thank you, Robert! Your feedback means a lot. I aimed for a conversational flow, gradually transitioning to introspection. I'm delighted you noticed the playful structure. It's these nuances that I believe make poetry engaging. - Blessings, Daniel

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/9/2024 2:46:00 PM

Have you been drinking down my local Daniel lol! these words I’ve heard so many times before, some guys will tell you exactly what they think you want to hear, and speak in dubious riddles, it’s easier for them to backtrack if not impressed with what they say, but the end goal is to get a pint from you, having said all that it can and sometimes does lead to friendly banter, until you stop buying then they move to another target, a fun one for sure, you’ve definitely been down my local, but the captcha says NEY! cheers David

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 5:56:00 PM

Hey David, thanks for engaging with my poem! Your insights deeply touched me, capturing the essence of those familiar encounters at the local pub. Your astute observation about the dynamic of flattery and backtracking rings true, reflecting the complexities of human interaction. Your witty reference to the captcha adds a clever twist, affirming the authenticity of our shared experiences. Cheers to your keen perception and playful banter! - Blessings, Daniel

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2024 2:27:00 PM

Daniel, loved your wonderful friendship poem, first impression are not always accurate.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 5:54:00 PM

Dear Tania, I appreciated your comments and it is amazing how our initial impressions cloud our judgments. Blessings, Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2024 1:11:00 PM

Maybe a pathological liar? haha. This was very entertaining.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 5:53:00 PM

Dear Andrea, thanks and you might be right. Have a blessed day! - Daniel

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/9/2024 8:47:00 AM

WoW! Daniel, I like how you " set up" this poem for the reader.It's a nice touch. What an interesting person to meet. His personality leaps off the page computer screen. I really enjoyed reading this piece. You described him in a way that was memorable to your reader. I found this fella to be eccentric as well. Excellent job. Have wonderful day. PS, Thanks for stopping by page to congratulate me-Alexis

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 9:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, Alexis! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and found it engaging. It means a lot to hear that the character's personality touched you and left a lasting impression. Your kind words truly made my day. I wish you a wonderful day as well! - Blessings, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/8/2024 6:58:00 PM

lol, you are so amusing when you tell us stories like this. You seem to get into character and voice quite easily. You are an entertainer and a fantastic poet, above all else.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 4:11:00 AM

Dear Rose, your laughter is music to my ears! I'm thrilled that my storytelling brought you joy. Getting into character is half the fun. Your kind words mean the world to me, especially coming from someone who appreciates the art of entertainment. Here's to many more laughs and poetic tales. Blessings, Daniel

Tonye George

Date: 4/8/2024 6:01:00 PM

What a way to get a new friend Daniel. Friendship is so dear and fragile, we must always water it. The unhappiest people are the ones who have never wailed. "But I sure ain't unhappy, not with tears in my eyes!" Love it.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 4:10:00 AM

Dear Tonye, your insightful comment touches upon the essence of friendship and the complexities of human emotions. I'm glad my words resonated with you, especially that tears don't always signify unhappiness. Thank you for appreciating the sentiment behind my poem. Let's continue to cherish and nurture the bonds of friendship. Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/8/2024 5:31:00 PM

Cleverly written work. Good flow, rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing your ideas about the man with no money, but a lot of tales to share. Your visit to my page was a delight. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 4:09:00 AM

Dear Sara, your gracious words truly made my day! I'm delighted you enjoyed the flow and rhythm of my piece about the man of stories. Your visit and feedback are deeply appreciated. Let's continue to celebrate the power of storytelling. Blessings, Daniel

David Fisher

Date: 4/8/2024 5:27:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Daniel. It seems like we've all met people like that who perplex; sometimes at first and unfortunately at last, too. It seemed like he had a couple of drinks ahead of time, and was just honing his craft.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 4:08:00 AM

Dear David, your astute observation adds depth to my poem. Indeed, we've all encountered those enigmatic souls who leave us pondering. Your insight into the character's demeanor adds richness to the interpretation. Thank you for appreciating the nuances of my writing. Here's to unraveling life's mysteries together. Blessings, Daniel

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/8/2024 2:25:00 PM

Dear Daniel, The core of initial reactions and the gradual formation of strong friendships are captured in this great Writing. A piece's stunning and long-lasting effect is largely due to its witty and fluid prose. It stresses the worth of delving deeper than first impressions and narratives and the intricate nature of relationships. Despite the stories' emotional appeal A lesson is to look past appearances and not make snap judgments evident. Your profundity and narrative skills are remarkable.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 4:05:00 AM

Dear Sotto, your thoughtful feedback is a treasure. Thank you for recognizing the essence of my writing and its message about the depth of relationships. Your words inspire me to continue delving into the intricacies of human connections. I'm grateful for your encouragement and for the opportunity to share my narratives with you. Blessings, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/8/2024 11:30:00 AM

Ain't nothin' like his tales, never gettin' old...An oddity! Loved it as always, dear Daniel!

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 4:13:00 AM

Dear Kim, your unwavering support means the world to me! I'm glad you enjoyed the uniqueness of my tales. Your appreciation fuels my creativity. Thank you for always being a wonderful friend and reader. Here's to more unforgettable stories ahead! Blessings, Daniel

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/8/2024 11:15:00 AM

"A poet, a pauper, a prince; his stories spun gold, Ain't nothin' like his tales, never gettin' old." A good story teller is welcomed the world wide. Well done, Daniel.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/9/2024 4:02:00 AM

Hello Joe, your words warmed my heart like a cozy fire on a winter's night. Thank you for seeing my poem's beauty and your kind encouragement. Your support means the world to me. Keep sharing your wisdom, friend. - Blessings, Daniel

Ink Empress

Date: 4/8/2024 10:23:00 AM

Dear daniel, its so good to see a different side to your poems too, youv written a very witty one that flows so well. And leaves also a message to the readers as well as shows that sometimes the beginnings of friendships can be strange but long lasting. I know that theres so much beneath the facade and stories some tell, but somehow i tend to fall for sob stories. Ahah. You never know tho, and we must always see beyond. And never judge someone also from skin and name, thats what iv gathered from this poem. I love the depth and also the storytelling nature of this! You are such a gifted poet. A fave it is for me! Pleasure reading always your work

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/8/2024 10:34:00 AM

Dearest Empress, your heartfelt reflection truly warms my heart. Thank you for appreciating the different dimensions of my poetry and recognizing the wit and flow in this piece. Your insights into the message it conveys about the unpredictability of friendships and the importance of seeing beyond facades are deeply reflective. Your support and encouragement mean the world to me, and I'm grateful for your kind words. It's readers like you who inspire me to continue sharing my poetry. Thank you for being such a cherished reader and making my day with your beautiful feedback. - Blessings, Daniel

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/8/2024 8:53:00 AM

This is lovely outlook of the many ramblings of some first meetings. Deep friendships usually take a while. I liked the introductory repartee involved in this writing.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/8/2024 9:30:00 AM

Dear Hilda, thank you for your visit and wonderful comments. Deep friendships do take awhile to hone. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Silent One

Date: 4/8/2024 8:18:00 AM

I really love the flow to this one.. The bond that develops between the narrator and the feller is an interesting central theme of the poem. Despite their differences, they find common ground and form a unique friendship that transcends societal expectations. This highlights the importance of empathy, acceptance, and human connection in overcoming barriers and forging meaningful relationships.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 4/8/2024 9:29:00 AM

Dear Silent One, your insightful interpretation truly captures the essence of my poem. Thank you for recognizing the depth of the bond between the narrator and the feller and emphasizing the profound themes of empathy and acceptance. Your feedback reaffirms the significance of human connection in breaking down barriers and fostering genuine relationships. - Blessings, my friend! - Daniel