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Then It Will End

In death we will be naked shred the disguise destroy the façade and be so vulnerable In death we will be naked With our wings we will raise we will be wind we will be sun and stars moon birds will scream With our wings we will raise From our hands light will fade it will glow softly for a while and then snuff out From our hands light will fade Our eyes will quietly break a vision will retreat will go inward remain there for just a moment Our eyes will quietly break Will there be peace in death? when no more questions are asked, no answers can be given, Will there be peace in death? *** July 11, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/12/2017 9:18:00 AM

Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 12:12:00 PM

Funom, thank you so much!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/12/2017 6:03:00 AM

If one prepares in the right way, then of course there will be peace. Impressive write Darren on this insightful poem...Maria xx

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 12:12:00 PM

Maria, thank you. I am happy you love my poem :)

Dean Wood

Date: 7/11/2017 4:18:00 PM

I truly believe the answer is yes! This is really well done Darren. I enjoyed reading and re-reading it. Regards, Dean

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 1:15:00 AM

I like that answer Dean. Thank you!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/11/2017 7:40:00 AM

I hope so but I'm in no hurry to find out.

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 1:15:00 AM

Lol Tim, indeed, baby steps ;)

Sara Ella

Date: 7/11/2017 7:17:00 AM

Love the pattern and the gentle way you have expressed this. The music and video are perfect for your poem :) Hugs to you <3

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 1:14:00 AM

Yeah, I chose that music with care, and love it too <3

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/11/2017 6:48:00 AM

Top of the Afternoon Darren. Yes, you do Free Verse proud with all her emotion that she pours. This is extremely thought out Darren. Expressive is an understatement. Allow me to say yes, there is peace in death at times but only times. Very few are those times and exceptions. The word extraordinary comes to mind. Have a wonderful afternoon. Blessings always and may this be your imagination and creativity working.

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 1:14:00 AM

Thanks Lisa. Peace indeed, not always, I agree on that too. See you, my friend :)

Verlecia Fields

Date: 7/11/2017 6:42:00 AM

the poem draws you in - as to give a little peace to the reader - and to erase fears and dubiety as one's read - "Will there be peace in death?" it seem, as if you know what the reader is asking ... its a very peaceful write - although its about death

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 1:13:00 AM

It is, isn't it? I fully agree with you Verlecia. Peaceful even though it's about death.

White Wolf

Date: 7/11/2017 6:07:00 AM

Chris has summed it up perfectly! Except he forgot to add globzelly! Brilliant my friend

Darren White
Date: 7/11/2017 6:17:00 AM

LOL, globzelly, wornamea and coodoolly? What else will follow?

Chris Green

Date: 7/11/2017 5:59:00 AM

Such a fantastic and creative collection of poetic thoughts my friend. I love the format of this and the thoughts it creates. This is a wonderful offering and your talent never ceases to amaze me.

Darren White
Date: 7/11/2017 6:16:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I like that format too indeed. It is as if you pause, repeat that in your brain and move on to the next part.