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The Youth Within

"My heart a reflection upon threads of embroidered lace drawn steadfastly upon my face turned yet ageless grace as I breathe the new dawn." Quote _by Poet Sitting on the front porch, I rock back and forth in the old rocking chair, drinking my morning coffee. I feel the youth within me a peaceful vigor cheering in my heart arise whilst the sun comes up weaving its ray through the spun woven clouds and the lavender Morning Glories open wide. I hear whispers in my conscious mind, a place of grace and youthful memories that chased and embraced dreams. The emerald tall grass reminds me of when I loved and danced around in its spears in my youth, as my sweetheart smothered me in kisses as he scooped me up and laid me down and welcomed the quietus of calm. I can still hear the faint sounds of long ago fluttering like sparrows as my heart yearns for that lost energetic youth. 12/1/2021

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Date: 12/9/2021 1:21:00 PM
Eve, your poem is divine and congratulations on your First place win in my "Y" Contest, new Poem and your quote is wonderful ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 12/6/2021 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "I feel the youth within me." Age is just a number. We are the age we feel. Have a blessed day/week.................
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Date: 12/5/2021 5:26:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats, Eve, on your TOP win.
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Date: 12/4/2021 9:35:00 AM
Eve this was destined to win my friend, such stupendous ardor and romance and passions and memories of youth, you brought it all back to life. congratulations my friend, hugs and love, Jenn
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Date: 12/4/2021 7:41:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win. A moving and profound poem~as we age we gather the memories that fill our book of life. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 12/3/2021 1:56:00 PM
So true, Eve. Youth passes so quickly. Congratulations on first place!
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Date: 12/3/2021 12:19:00 PM
So beautiful and touching, Eve! Where would we be without such memories!! Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/3/2021 4:26:00 AM
Best wishes Eve on this brilliant piece, Panagiota
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Date: 12/2/2021 7:27:00 PM
Gosh. These memories are pure gold, Eve. They're so vibrant. ... Ready to rock on out of that old chair! Wonderful! :) gw
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Date: 12/2/2021 4:54:00 PM
what a beautiful poem on youth, Eve. I went the other way, not nearly as optimistic sounding. Love this.
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Date: 12/2/2021 3:24:00 PM
Delightful read dwelling in sweet memories, Eve. So well written!
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Date: 12/2/2021 2:18:00 AM
Wow Eve, you undid me with this one, such utter beauty A fav for me, this one goes down into history xo
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2021 9:02:00 AM
Sweet lady, thank you ??
Date: 12/1/2021 10:53:00 AM
This morning's newspaper reports how a couple in their 90's found love and married, so don't lose sight of your future! Aloha!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2021 9:02:00 AM
Hope for the future , Rico, thank you. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/1/2021 5:31:00 AM
Eve I wrote a very long comment, but Jesus stopped me saying as a da who allowed my X to go through with Choice/abortion, I was dying in my 30s. Mow in my 60s, I have more energy & vim, thanx 2 Jesus & repentance. Enjoying life & evangelism, although frustration with "basic Services" in South Africa. Regular water & electricity cuts (water -shedding; loadshedding, our terms, LOL!) And my garden thrives with butternut, hot peppers, peas, beans ... beloved Marigolds & geraniums. Glory to God PTL
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/1/2021 8:33:00 AM
Anil, your faith outreaches the universe... God blessings are His miracles in this time of need. Thank you for your comment a friend in spirit.
Date: 12/1/2021 3:55:00 AM
Wonderfully expressed, Eve. Oh, those memories of youth. Lovely write...best wishes in the contest. Love & hugs, Charlie
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/1/2021 8:34:00 AM
Charles, thank you so much my friend. May you have a fantastic path for Christmas.
Date: 12/1/2021 1:37:00 AM
Wow, this is beautiful poetry, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/1/2021 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Harry, your inspiring words allow me to keep my thoughts going in my writing. Hugs and have a fantastic Christmas.
Date: 12/1/2021 1:02:00 AM
Memories of youth, always so vivid, never to be forgotten. Great images. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/1/2021 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, Victor, those memories keep us going. Hugs dear friend.
Date: 11/30/2021 10:42:00 PM
Very beautiful Eve, really you have become a very fine poet! I always remember Lucy telling me to look out for you!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/1/2021 8:37:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Yes, she still is in my thoughts. Hugs Eve

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