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The Worm of Introspection

The entrails of your thoughts are gleaned, spread out on the canvas of your life. Sorted, culled, stacked and cleaned, ready for the worm of introspection to arrive. Leaving a trail of raw emotions, wriggling in, to see what can twist. Intellectually, you go through the motions, while life takes shots at your pride with a fist. Strength, once yours, leaves you bare, against the truth of what you see. Nothing is left that you can share, for your no longer who you use to be. For the contest: Free For All Sponsored by Leighann Anderson placement: 8th

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Date: 5/28/2011 4:58:00 AM
Nice poem - I really like the first line. Congrats on the win. Mike
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Date: 5/27/2011 12:04:00 PM
Great poem with alot of cool imagery esp first verse! Great win and conratulations, Paula
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Date: 5/27/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Paula. Awesome piece. Nice going. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:34:00 AM
Congratulatons on your win in the "Free For All" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2011 8:20:00 AM
congrats Paula on your excellent win in the free for all contest with this extaordinary entry my friend.. great lines ..and concept... enjoy another sweet success with luv... happy and safe holiday weekend...too..luv..
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:47:00 PM
so deeply emotional Paula.. revealing much sensitivity .. wonderful words for this new contest my friend.. good luck.. again..thankxx so very much for enjoying my cheating entry .. working on card entry .. house hunting with my son all night.. oh..so tired...
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:41:00 PM
time has a way of changing people. I have enjoyed your write tonight.good luck in the contest.. cory
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Date: 5/23/2011 2:33:00 PM
Many wonderful and emotional lines within your poem, Paula, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for my placement in your Cheating contest, I am very honored and thrilled and looking forward to the next challenge~~
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:23:00 PM
Great poem for the contest Paula. Thank you for my placement in your Cheaten' contest. The new one is going to take some thought. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/23/2011 11:08:00 AM
Such a sad, emotional piece, Paula. I do hope you will be feeling hunky dory again soon. Thanks - your contest was such fun!
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