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The winds of time settling in one's own mind, Clarity of the past will dissipate, In the winds that blow you may be inclined, To find yourself standing there with your fate. Like the pollen in a flower, waiting, For life without yearning would be shallow, On thin ice we all find ourselves skating, We must treasure every moment, hallow. Soft bells will chime, a peaceful melody Serenity inside, accept a life Imperfect, yet with highs, with love, you see? It's how we are, all we can do is strive And washing over you are waves of calm The peace you find inside a soothing balm

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Akkina Downing

Date: 5/24/2017 8:38:00 PM

I very much enjoyed reading this. So calming and refreshing :) A fab collaboration you two.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/20/2017 9:38:00 AM

This is a poem that keeps revealing more and more as you take the time to read again and again . . . and I love its peaceful ending; such a smooth finish to a brilliant piece:) Amitiés

John Herlihy

Date: 5/16/2017 12:44:00 AM

I am struggling to keep up with posting reviews and poems. So busy at work these days. Loved this from you both, wish I knew who wrote what. An utterly charming sonnet. I have been trying my hand at sonnets these days as well and hope to post them soon.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/14/2017 11:21:00 PM

I read this a few times, each time the wisdom sunk deeper, great poem!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/14/2017 7:34:00 PM

Wonderful write, W W, and Darren, especially the first two sentences in the second stanza.. great imagery ~*

Sara Ella

Date: 5/13/2017 12:32:00 PM

Wow! Very soothing poem! I love your collaborations <3 This one is a favorite :)

Darren White
Date: 5/14/2017 10:55:00 AM

Thanks my friend :)

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/13/2017 10:56:00 AM

Love and happiness (and acceptance) - the balm for calm. A wonderful message. You guys did a GREAT job with this :)

Darren White
Date: 5/14/2017 10:54:00 AM

Thank you Lenna! We love to collaborate :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/13/2017 10:17:00 AM

Wow guys this has to be your best...like a fine wine you get better with time.

Darren White
Date: 5/14/2017 10:52:00 AM

Thanks Tim. Wonderful compliment!

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/13/2017 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations to the both of you for this inspirational poem to reach many :) Well done.

Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 9:35:00 AM

Thanks Heidi, it's always wonderful to write together with Budgie.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/13/2017 5:39:00 AM

Good Evening White Wolf. And yes Darren. Hi Penguin. To the both of you I say this is exceptional. Honestly. This is one that must be read out loud with emphasis and pauses between stanzas and thoughts. I can not put it in words, just know this has worth and value if you read back your words. So much of life is stated within them. Wonderful completely and entirely. Have a wonderful night White Wolf.

Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 9:35:00 AM

Thanks Lisa, also on behalf of the howling wolf Budgie :) It's a very calming and peaceful poem, and I love it

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/13/2017 1:19:00 AM

Your profound writing and deep philosophical thought makes me fear that the days of my status as a philosopher are numbered my dear frieds: WW and Darren, Darren and WW. A 7 to each!

Darren White
Date: 5/13/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios, and I do think the compliment is nice, but there's no greater philosopher than yourself :)

Darren White

Date: 5/13/2017 12:20:00 AM

As always, a wonderful collaboration with you Budgie :) I love this inspirational poem.