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The Visit

Auditioned sleepless nights, varied embattled cries A myriad of tears, from her baby boy’s eyes A kind and caring soul, a gracious golden heart As I watched my mother die, my world was torn apart Another storm to weather, strong winds and pounding rain A tortuous raging cancer, extensive heartache and pain Mortality’s final eve, the end almost in sight Then came a tailored visit, on this cold and dreary night An evacuation of pain, a sanguine smile left to see A man now stood in the corner, directly in front of me This vision was just for her, I was unable to even look She said that he was more beautiful than depicted in any book With the passing of this moment, her anguish returned once more Gone was the smile I had seen and my heart fell back to the floor Like a ship out on the ocean, depleted of all its power I sullenly drifting within, my mother’s final hour Dramatically with no warning, she sat up and smiled again From the edge of her bed, he said we’re going home my friend The words my mother spoke, healed my heart down to its core He simply took her hand, then the cancer was no more 11/20/2021 “V” New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 11/29/2021 1:17:00 PM
Mark, congratulations on your Second place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful and so emotional ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Mark Koplin
Date: 12/1/2021 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 11/23/2021 7:49:00 PM
A great heartfelt poem, Mark, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Have a great Thanksgiving with family. Hugs Eve
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/24/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Eve, happy thanksgiving!
Date: 11/23/2021 7:32:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win mark, hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/23/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend! I appreciate you Jan! I hope you are continuing to feel stronger.
Date: 11/22/2021 7:15:00 AM
I have read many of your poems, Mark, but this one is clearly one of your most emotionally moving.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2021 9:45:00 AM
I can tell that you did. It's inspiring.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/22/2021 7:19:00 AM
It’s so good to have you back my friend, I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your support and encouraging words. I wrote this from the depths of my heart.
Date: 11/22/2021 2:07:00 AM
Wonderful uplifting poem Mark, I sense the solace come over you in the most disturbing of circumstances, I experienced something similar after my own mother died, thanks for sharing, cheers David
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/22/2021 6:27:00 AM
Thanks David, I’m sorry for your loss.
Date: 11/21/2021 11:37:00 AM
this is utter poignancy. I bet it scores super high in Dear Heart's contest. So emotional and beautiful. Early thanksgiving wishes to you (as I am going on a vaycay this week!)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/21/2021 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your kind thoughts. Happy thanksgiving!
Date: 11/21/2021 2:59:00 AM
Oh my…. Mark ,what an absolutely beautiful heart tugging poem! Love it. Debx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/21/2021 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Deb, I appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 11/20/2021 7:14:00 PM
we can but watch helplessly as cancer consumes the body of our loved one from inside out, with death, the final release from suffering. poignantly penned Mark, takes me back to the torturous moments when my mom died of cancer.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/21/2021 7:22:00 AM
I’m sorry about your Mom. Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 11/20/2021 9:13:00 AM
I can feel the sense of great loss in your verse Mark and also the joy that she was finally going home leaving her suffering behind. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/20/2021 10:01:00 AM
It was life altering for me in many ways
Date: 11/20/2021 8:43:00 AM
I have a huge lump in my throat my friend , she is forever at peace, a superb entry for the contest, hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/20/2021 9:01:00 AM
My goal was to write something that was profound and moving. Thank you so much my friend!
Date: 11/20/2021 7:05:00 AM
Mark, this is so beautiful! My mom was in a coma before she died but my solace came from finding one huge tear in the corner of her eye. ~ hugs
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/20/2021 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I’m so sorry for your loss and pain. A tear of joy I have no doubt. Enjoy your day!

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