The Visit

Auditioned sleepless nights, varied embattled cries
A myriad of tears, from her baby boy’s eyes
A kind and caring soul, a gracious golden heart
As I watched my mother die, my world was torn apart

Another storm to weather, strong winds and pounding rain
A tortuous raging cancer, extensive heartache and pain
Mortality’s final eve, the end almost in sight
Then came a tailored visit, on this cold and dreary night

An evacuation of pain, a sanguine smile left to see
A man now stood in the corner, directly in front of me
This vision was just for her, I was unable to even look
She said that he was more beautiful than depicted in any book

With the passing of this moment, her anguish returned once more
Gone was the smile I had seen and my heart fell back to the floor
Like a ship out on the ocean, depleted of all its power
I sullenly drifting within, my mother’s final hour

Dramatically with no warning, she sat up and smiled again
From the edge of her bed, he said we’re going home my friend
The words my mother spoke, healed my heart down to its core
He simply took her hand, then the cancer was no more

11/20/2021
“V” New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Constance La France
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La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Mark, congratulations on your Second place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful and so emotional ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Koplin Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Thank you so much!
Roper Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 7:49 PM
A great heartfelt poem, Mark, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Have a great Thanksgiving with family. Hugs Eve
Koplin Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Thanks Eve, happy thanksgiving!
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win mark, hugs jan xx
Koplin Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much my friend! I appreciate you Jan! I hope you are continuing to feel stronger.
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:15 AM
I have read many of your poems, Mark, but this one is clearly one of your most emotionally moving.
Lane Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 9:45 AM
I can tell that you did. It's inspiring.
Koplin Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 7:19 AM
It’s so good to have you back my friend, I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your support and encouraging words. I wrote this from the depths of my heart.
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 2:07 AM
Wonderful uplifting poem Mark, I sense the solace come over you in the most disturbing of circumstances, I experienced something similar after my own mother died, thanks for sharing, cheers David
Koplin Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 6:27 AM
Thanks David, I’m sorry for your loss.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:37 AM
this is utter poignancy. I bet it scores super high in Dear Heart's contest. So emotional and beautiful. Early thanksgiving wishes to you (as I am going on a vaycay this week!)
Koplin Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your kind thoughts. Happy thanksgiving!
M  Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 2:59 AM
Oh my…. Mark ,what an absolutely beautiful heart tugging poem! Love it. Debx
Koplin Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Thanks Deb, I appreciate your kind comment.
Seeker Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:14 PM
we can but watch helplessly as cancer consumes the body of our loved one from inside out, with death, the final release from suffering. poignantly penned Mark, takes me back to the torturous moments when my mom died of cancer.
Koplin Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 7:22 AM
I’m sorry about your Mom. Thanks for stopping by!
Cunningham Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 9:13 AM
I can feel the sense of great loss in your verse Mark and also the joy that she was finally going home leaving her suffering behind. Tom
Koplin Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 10:01 AM
It was life altering for me in many ways
Allison Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:43 AM
I have a huge lump in my throat my friend , she is forever at peace, a superb entry for the contest, hugs jan xx
Koplin Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 9:01 AM
My goal was to write something that was profound and moving. Thank you so much my friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Mark, this is so beautiful! My mom was in a coma before she died but my solace came from finding one huge tear in the corner of her eye. ~ hugs
Koplin Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Thank you Kim, I’m so sorry for your loss and pain. A tear of joy I have no doubt. Enjoy your day!
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