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The Virgin, the Villian and the Black Dog

When first freed from mother's skirt, still arrayed in white, dew kissed, peach sweet, blush cored, I dove into love, Persephone pierced; where ox-eyed daisies grew within a field abreast a Roman ... in daylight. Dry merlot overcast the blooded spot on site where passion flowered upon the box stitched blue quilt Grandmother with constancy had imbued. Yet, youth was not enough to make the man contrite. An omen ran through red bee balm, a hound of black long-limbed, loosed to pursue the brazen few who dared to lay unabashed in sunlight, the farmer stared back from the porch; he saw them run, saw yarrow in her hair. Ill fated yes, but first love is honeyed and that is a fact; nothing's sweeter than a maid undressed in open air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/23/2014 9:04:00 AM
Debbie, this is absolutely brilliant - no wonder you received the TOP win! Congratulations, my friend!
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Date: 7/21/2014 3:52:00 AM
amazing imagery and description Debbie a worthy first placed winner! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 7/17/2014 9:20:00 AM
I came back to see if this gem won and lo and behold it took top honors! Big congrats on this win!!!
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Date: 7/16/2014 8:01:00 PM
memories can be bitter sweet, but yes in that time in that place, nothing sweeter, though we chase it the rest of our lives congratulations Debbie
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Date: 7/16/2014 7:12:00 PM
lovely Debbie congrats on win hugs
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Date: 7/16/2014 5:24:00 PM
Stunningly descriptive, well done on your marvelous win!
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:08:00 PM
This, in spite of what happened, is still a memory to cherish! A sweet memory of young love; well done...especially the imagery and the last line, the cherry on the cake! Congrats on a deserved win, Debbie! // paul
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Date: 7/16/2014 3:19:00 PM
This is outstanding, Debbie. I read it earlier not realizing it was for the contest; like it better on second reading. Congratulations on the top place in Cyndi's contest.
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Date: 7/16/2014 1:18:00 PM
Nice Debbie... Congratulations on winning first in the contest... Verlena
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Date: 7/16/2014 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie. I need to read this one again. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/16/2014 10:08:00 AM
What I love so much about each contest/challenge, is later reading the different interpretations, different paths each poet takes.....it is a constant surprise where the imagination, or life experience brings to mind. A garden party brought to mind, a whole different thought for your words to explore....and it is brilliant ! I'm honored to share this place with your amazing poem, Deb!! :) Congrats to you!
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Date: 7/16/2014 7:40:00 AM
I am in awe of such imagery, Debbie my friend! Congrats on top win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/16/2014 5:55:00 AM
Wow Debbie!!! Such beautiful images esp the first three lines and the last two lines...:D BIG. BIG CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 7/16/2014 1:43:00 AM
Oh my really amazing! Was Tough one for me to understand ,, read thrice ,, though I m not a literary person,, hardly knew forms of poetry an year ago,, slowly learnt at soup ,, but truly can appreciate the beauty of ur unique masterpieces Debbie ! Congrats on first place win! Really fortunate to hv known u !
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Date: 7/15/2014 10:08:00 PM
You had me at "dove into love" and then earned your "Oscar" with the last line. Please read my winners blog. PS... I am now picturing you as Lady Godiva sans steed .... Congrats! PPS... when I want to be extra bratty, I will begin to refer to you as Godiva. (Dee chortles and offers a robe) PPSS-- Speech, please... ;)
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Date: 6/18/2014 1:13:00 PM
True story too LOL was not funny at all at the time!
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Date: 6/18/2014 10:03:00 AM
Stunning piece and I like the visual at the end.
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Date: 6/9/2014 11:24:00 AM
Wow!!! What a story and picture you paint with this one, Deb. bfn Lainie
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:00:00 PM
This is a charmer, a thrill and a blast to read... Last two lines seals it as a true gem !!! Bravooooooo!!!!!
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Date: 6/7/2014 10:27:00 PM
I'm with Joseph on this poem here. LOVE that last line of YOURS!!!
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Date: 6/7/2014 10:25:00 PM
that last line You didn't like is just so hard for me to convey. See what you think now.
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Date: 6/7/2014 7:49:00 PM
A masterful write Debbie...great last line...best wishes
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