The Virgin, the Villian and the Black Dog

When first freed from mother's skirt, still arrayed in white,
dew kissed, peach sweet, blush cored, I dove into
love,  Persephone pierced; where ox-eyed daisies grew
within a field abreast a Roman ... in daylight.
Dry merlot overcast the blooded spot on site 
where passion flowered upon the box stitched blue
quilt Grandmother with constancy had imbued.  
Yet, youth was not enough to make the man contrite.

An omen ran through red bee balm, a hound of black
long-limbed, loosed to pursue the brazen few who dared 
to lay unabashed in sunlight, the farmer stared back
from the porch; he saw them run, saw yarrow in her hair.
Ill fated yes, but first love is honeyed and that is a fact;
nothing's sweeter than a maid undressed in open air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Debbie, this is absolutely brilliant - no wonder you received the TOP win! Congratulations, my friend!
Allison Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 3:52 AM
amazing imagery and description Debbie a worthy first placed winner! Hugs jan xxx
Lindley Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 9:20 AM
I came back to see if this gem won and lo and behold it took top honors! Big congrats on this win!!!
Parker Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:01 PM
memories can be bitter sweet, but yes in that time in that place, nothing sweeter, though we chase it the rest of our lives congratulations Debbie
Hamilton Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:12 PM
lovely Debbie congrats on win hugs
Nance Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:24 PM
Stunningly descriptive, well done on your marvelous win!
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 4:08 PM
This, in spite of what happened, is still a memory to cherish! A sweet memory of young love; well done...especially the imagery and the last line, the cherry on the cake! Congrats on a deserved win, Debbie! // paul
Gibson Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 3:19 PM
This is outstanding, Debbie. I read it earlier not realizing it was for the contest; like it better on second reading. Congratulations on the top place in Cyndi's contest.
Walker  Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Nice Debbie... Congratulations on winning first in the contest... Verlena
Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations Debbie. I need to read this one again. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:08 AM
What I love so much about each contest/challenge, is later reading the different interpretations, different paths each poet takes.....it is a constant surprise where the imagination, or life experience brings to mind. A garden party brought to mind, a whole different thought for your words to explore....and it is brilliant ! I'm honored to share this place with your amazing poem, Deb!! :) Congrats to you!
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:40 AM
I am in awe of such imagery, Debbie my friend! Congrats on top win! Hugs.. Arlene
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Wow Debbie!!! Such beautiful images esp the first three lines and the last two lines...:D BIG. BIG CONGRATULATIONS!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 1:43 AM
Oh my really amazing! Was Tough one for me to understand ,, read thrice ,, though I m not a literary person,, hardly knew forms of poetry an year ago,, slowly learnt at soup ,, but truly can appreciate the beauty of ur unique masterpieces Debbie ! Congrats on first place win! Really fortunate to hv known u !
Macmillan Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 10:08 PM
You had me at "dove into love" and then earned your "Oscar" with the last line. Please read my winners blog. PS... I am now picturing you as Lady Godiva sans steed .... Congrats! PPS... when I want to be extra bratty, I will begin to refer to you as Godiva. (Dee chortles and offers a robe) PPSS-- Speech, please... ;)
Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 1:13 PM
True story too LOL was not funny at all at the time!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Stunning piece and I like the visual at the end.
George   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Wow!!! What a story and picture you paint with this one, Deb. bfn Lainie
Lindley Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 11:00 PM
This is a charmer, a thrill and a blast to read... Last two lines seals it as a true gem !!! Bravooooooo!!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:27 PM
I'm with Joseph on this poem here. LOVE that last line of YOURS!!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:25 PM
that last line You didn't like is just so hard for me to convey. See what you think now.
May Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 7:49 PM
A masterful write Debbie...great last line...best wishes
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