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The Uss Indianapolis

It was in July of 1945 And the USS Indianapolis Had a crew of nearly 12 hundred alive But a Japanese sub fired and did not miss American sailors had completed their job Delivering parts for the first atomic bomb Some sank with the ship, others in the sea did bob No food, few lifeboats, ocean deceptively calm Surprise attack, no distress signal had been sent It was four days later those floating were spotted The survival rate was just 25 percent With hundreds of sailors’ bodies the sea was dotted In the movie “Jaws” as Captain Quint had related, “The sharks came cruisin'. So we formed into tight groups.” Six men per hour were killed while for help they waited All were lost but 316 Navy troops Some victims died of exposure or starvation But far more were killed by the sharks that had attacked These men lost their lives in service to our nation But bomb parts delivered had a deadlier impact One of the last ships that was sunk in World War II The Indianapolis had turned the war’s tide With a mission carried out by a courageous crew Victory was soon celebrated by allies worldwide This is an entry for the History Poems contest

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Date: 1/14/2011 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Diane in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Dazzle Us With History". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:24:00 AM
Congrats, Diane. Outstanding account. Excellent write. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:24:00 AM
Hi Congratulations on your achievement with this fine historical piece, Eamon
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:16:00 PM
Good reminder of a historical fact that makes one thankful for the men and women that still volunteer and defend our country..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:28:00 PM
Diane, this was another poem that brought me back to my youth. The Navy was always for me when I was younger. I always loved boats. It was bad enough being bombed or torpedoed, but to then face the seas other predators, the sharks. It must have been horrifying. We will never comprehend being circled by natures beauties, then the inevitable in those blood spilled waters. Many congratualtions on your fine win in the History contest, well deserved....:)
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations Diane, on your worthy success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:53:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem..althoug the topic was very sad. thank you for reminding me of this ..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:34:00 AM
This is another side of those terrible days which has not been often told. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:05:00 AM
Diane, Congratulations on your honorable mention with this outstanding poem. James and I judged separately assigning points to all 37 entries and the competition was incredible. Just tabulating the rankings took hours. Take pride in your accomplishment. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/11/2011 8:10:00 AM
Yes, I knew the story of the INDIANAPOLIS, and the terrible shark-end of many of the men....and there was also a movie with Stacey Keach ...did you see it?....you have described it poignantly and I hope you will be a winner ...it's a great poem....Syd
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Date: 1/10/2011 8:59:00 PM
Picked a sad and heavy one, but well done. Good luck.
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:54:00 PM
Hello, Diane.. I have missed the soup much these days.. Since its a big place with wonderful poets.. I enjoy seeing all my familiar poets friends name.. by the way.. I was watching the movie "JAWS" last night... . forced my x-fiance to watch it with me... I enjoyed reading the history you share with us here.. take care.. and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:38:00 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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