The Upper Crust

The upper crust folks do not trust they bite into the lower Beer and pretzels just five bucks chew on life much slower

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/29/2023 8:35:00 AM

Oh so cleverly friend gw. Tell me, where is this place I can get beer and pretzels for five bucks? laf :)

Bill Baker

Date: 10/28/2023 4:16:00 PM

An interesting delima, gw. We all need to slow down a little and experience living instead of just being alive.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/28/2023 7:42:00 PM

You're right. As Simon and Garfunkel once sang: 'Slow down; you (and I) move too fast...

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/28/2023 4:12:00 PM

Interesting write, as I digest your words, so tongue in cheek! It is a twisted system that could one day cause it to go and bite itself in the... but, I digress. Such fun and yet profound words from a wise guy :) You are a wise guy, in the best sense of the word :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/28/2023 7:43:00 PM

Actually, my birth name was 'John Q. Wisenheimer.' Didn't want to live with that the rest of my life. lol. ~ gw

R J. Elless

Date: 10/27/2023 7:40:00 AM

That is great stuff. Whimsical and truth with meaning. One is not enough, three is two many. Keep Rolling.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/28/2023 7:45:00 PM

Rolling I can do, at least! I grew quite 'roly-poly' during COVID. ~ X. O. Skeleton

John Lawless

Date: 10/27/2023 6:05:00 AM

but does anyone ever finish a Guiness??

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/27/2023 4:34:00 AM

I appreciate your wit and cleverness in writing this rhyme poem. I agree, we need to relax and take life a bit slower. Have a relaxing day! Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 10/27/2023 3:26:00 AM

Witty. This made me giggle.