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The Truth of Love - POTD

The truth is cruel, a blurred reality. The truth is in my heart carefully hidden from prying eyes. Don't sigh my friend, you cannot read it in my face, 'tis well concealed, rest assured as a secret newly found, hid from curious eyes. So, I hide my truth, I do it on purpose, keep it veiled for it is mine. Don't ask: a futile plea. I once told the truth that led to a beleaguered life. Ah, I had high hopes then. Now I've had enough. I keep my secret. A pack of ravening wolves gnawing at my insides will never pry away that which I carefully hide. Which really is a pity, for 'tis agony for me not to reveal openly the love I harbor for ye.

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Date: 3/2/2024 1:48:00 PM
Wow, such a great POTD Victor. It is often people ask "How are you doing?" either just wanting to hear "Oh I'm doing GREAT!" or possibly for some not so sincere persons, the opportunity to pass judgement or gather some juicy tidbits to share with others in the form of gossip. Yes, though a pack of emotions may be howling within, it is often wisdom to hush the wolfy puppies of difficult emotions. I hope you are doing well and having a nice weekend Victor, and congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:27:00 AM
What an awesome love poem that got POTD. Very creative and Congratulations my friend. Wishing you a great week ahead. Hugs and blessings Victor. Jennifer.
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Date: 2/24/2024 8:49:00 PM
Victor your Romantic side brought about this passionate gem of a poem. I love the ending. It was so nice to read from you my friend. I was so happy it received Poetry Soup Honors, do deserving. Hope all is well missed your Poetry...
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Date: 2/22/2024 7:53:00 PM
Hi Victor, back to your highly romantic poem with Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD
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Date: 2/22/2024 6:43:00 PM
Victor. I missed your POTD, sorry,,its a Sometimes I think I don’t want to write my truth. Well, what am I gonna write about butterflies? Pangie Not me.. I’d rather write about what I experience.. and whether people like me or not, that doesn’t matter. What matters is that? I expressed myself where I want to not the way you want to hear it or anybody else wants to hear it.. yes and I make people mad because they don’t wanna hear it and that’s too bad. I’m gonna be me until I die..
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Date: 2/22/2024 1:51:00 PM
Great job, Victor. Congrats for the POTD win
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Date: 2/21/2024 8:18:00 PM
Heartfelt congratulations on your POTD honors, my friend. This beautiful poem is a fave. :)
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:17:00 PM
Dear Victor, it’s a pleasure to return with my heartiest congratulations for your well-deserved POTD honors. Enjoy the accolades my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:36:00 PM
If feelings are secretly hidden from view, love can still be felt through the eyes. Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/21/2024 2:55:00 PM
Hurray Victor! Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 2/21/2024 2:01:00 PM
Enthusiastic Congratulations on a grand POTD. Enjoy your special poetry day, Victor. Blessings
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Date: 2/21/2024 11:41:00 AM
Back with congratulations for your POTD honor, Victor! This poem is bathed in honesty and sincerity! Very nice. Still sending blessings of comfort.
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Date: 2/21/2024 10:40:00 AM
Your secret is safe with me. No matter how painful, love is love. Congratulations on your Poem Of The Day, Victor Buhagiar! It is so good to see you back so soon, love it! ;D
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Date: 2/21/2024 9:17:00 AM
Excellently crafted and creative. I loved it! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 2/21/2024 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving POTD.
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful and brilliant. Love it. God bless you and congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:26:00 AM
- Back with a smile and congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:06:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your POTD, Victor! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Date: 2/21/2024 7:01:00 AM
Gnawing, away. Wow. That sounds brutal. Victor, Congratulations on Your POTD. Keep Rolling.
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Date: 2/21/2024 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations Victor on your POTD! I can feel your unrequited love. Paulette
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:11:00 AM
Nice POTD Vic.
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Date: 2/21/2024 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! God bless!
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Date: 2/21/2024 4:41:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Victor
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Date: 2/21/2024 4:41:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Victor--second POTD within a week--so rare--enjoy!!
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Date: 2/21/2024 4:34:00 AM
Dear David, Congrats on POTW! You took me on an incredible journey filled with humor, adventure, and a touch of whimsy. Your creativity in exploring the quirky names of towns and weaving them into a narrative is awe-inspiring. Each stanza unfolded like a new chapter in an exciting road trip story. Congratulations on crafting such a delightful and entertaining piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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