The Tree

When I look at a tree
enchanted I am by
grand height and width,

luxurious foliage, plush branches
on display – somewhat jealous
of apparent supportive appeal, 

birds that sing and play in the sway,

such vibrant array; their home,
a natural sanctuary, perhaps
an outdoor cathedral where they also
pray?

I recall a Psych-professor, making
fun of me to the class, for the paper
I wrote (suggesting that my dog was
capable of love) – He, the professor, a man
schooled entirely in animal instincts, 
proclaimed my pet's affection was not to be,
in fact, the professor's own seldom example
of compassion
was my generous “C”

back to my fascination with this tree: what 
lies beneath (a few above ground, but most
of them unable to see) is a large community of roots: 

downward growth for firmness, nourishment 
and steadfast footing – a
way to maintain lofty strength, entwined 
with earth, quite solidly, inseparably gnarled 
(seeming quite painfully bent)

reminded I am of God, His arguably less
than perfect, struggling man; thinking there must 
a system better, some more lenient, alternative, less
punitive plan -- 

strict obedience to the bible 
for most human tastes appearing 
far too liable....
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Maverick Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 1:22 AM
Coming back just to share some insight God Obviously put in my mind, about trees you Got quite close to it with the mention of roots If you are at a distance looking at a say ball Or rounded top tree, imagine an hourglass It's a balanced life, the above branches shape Will be matched by the root mass below.' God bless all.'
DiMino Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Hi Joe; seems you have given this one more thought: Love the image of an hourglass!~and all those spiritual roots! Great concept. Thank you my friend.
Maverick Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:16 AM
Made by the Crearor..Trees wonderful assets But not to the point we would sacrifice to them Not that I'm thinking you mean such Joe.' Irs just you know how some can take word or Two out of context ' Yes I agree God is the only Recourse sustenance inspiration for a Christian.'
DiMino Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 6:43 AM
Or use them for a sacrifice. I hear you, Joe. I don't mind people disagreeing with me -- in context and out of context...I certainly do not know everything, even a fraction. Blessings my friend. Thank you for thoughtfully reading, and honestly commenting.
Maverick Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:17 AM
Oh and what a blinkered Prifessor '
Baker Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 2:41 PM
Things are not what they seem then, Joe. The way of our Creator God is both the best way and the easiest way. Traveling the other roads till death will lead to tragedy. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on trees. I love trees and their characteristics. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Maverick Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 12:18 AM
Well put Bill '
DiMino Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 3:27 PM
Thank you, Bill; your brother in Christ. Blessings!
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 11:26 AM
An absorbing and deep poem, containing wise insights, Joe. Beautifully written! :)
DiMino Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Thank you, Evelyn; have a safe 4th of July my friend. Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Much to gleam from this intellectual discourse my friend. Your poem makes me pause and think. Whatever gives them comfort--let them find their own truth--such as the one you convey.
DiMino Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 9:58 AM
For sure, Vijay~very wise: it is not that no one sees truth, nor should the focus be that my special truth is different from the truth of others, each having his or her own -- it is that there are countless truths, and we should all strive separately and together, to bring them forth for the greater good of God and His/Her entire Humanity. Blessings my friend.
George Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 5:46 AM
In the same way a tree has a body above the crust of the earth, it also has a gnarled root system under the earth's crust struggling to support the whole being ! So you too see yourself as a struggling man striving for perfection drawing sustenance from God just as the roots of the tree do. A poem which goes deep beyond the peripheral meaning ! Great poem, Joe
DiMino Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Very perceptive! I think you are on to something here. Blessings my friend. Thank you so much for reasoning this one out, and shedding your personal light on the subject -- we are God's Majority. Greatest when we join mind with heart.
Romios Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Prince de Mino, this is one of your best! Hence, fave for me, professors can be thick headed…A degree does not give them a corner on truth. Smart b_utts fill the planet. They are not God. Hugs, Panagiota xxx
DiMino Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Oh well...he still passed me, but just:) Thank you, Pangie.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Joe, I loved the part about dogs and that professor not believing they can love. The whole poem is awesome!
DiMino Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:05 PM
Thank you, Andrea; that was cute, and a true story as well. I liked music and art classes better.
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