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The Tree

When I look at a tree enchanted I am by grand height and width, luxurious foliage, plush branches on display – somewhat jealous of apparent supportive appeal, birds that sing and play in the sway, such vibrant array; their home, a natural sanctuary, perhaps an outdoor cathedral where they also pray? I recall a Psych-professor, making fun of me to the class, for the paper I wrote (suggesting that my dog was capable of love) – He, the professor, a man schooled entirely in animal instincts, proclaimed my pet's affection was not to be, in fact, the professor's own seldom example of compassion was my generous “C” back to my fascination with this tree: what lies beneath (a few above ground, but most of them unable to see) is a large community of roots: downward growth for firmness, nourishment and steadfast footing – a way to maintain lofty strength, entwined with earth, quite solidly, inseparably gnarled (seeming quite painfully bent) reminded I am of God, His arguably less than perfect, struggling man; thinking there must a system better, some more lenient, alternative, less punitive plan -- strict obedience to the bible for most human tastes appearing far too liable....

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Date: 7/10/2022 1:22:00 AM
Coming back just to share some insight God Obviously put in my mind, about trees you Got quite close to it with the mention of roots If you are at a distance looking at a say ball Or rounded top tree, imagine an hourglass It's a balanced life, the above branches shape Will be matched by the root mass below.' God bless all.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/10/2022 7:04:00 AM
Hi Joe; seems you have given this one more thought: Love the image of an hourglass!~and all those spiritual roots! Great concept. Thank you my friend.
Date: 7/8/2022 12:16:00 AM
Made by the Crearor..Trees wonderful assets But not to the point we would sacrifice to them Not that I'm thinking you mean such Joe.' Irs just you know how some can take word or Two out of context ' Yes I agree God is the only Recourse sustenance inspiration for a Christian.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/8/2022 6:43:00 AM
Or use them for a sacrifice. I hear you, Joe. I don't mind people disagreeing with me -- in context and out of context...I certainly do not know everything, even a fraction. Blessings my friend. Thank you for thoughtfully reading, and honestly commenting.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 7/8/2022 12:17:00 AM
Oh and what a blinkered Prifessor '
Date: 7/5/2022 2:41:00 PM
Things are not what they seem then, Joe. The way of our Creator God is both the best way and the easiest way. Traveling the other roads till death will lead to tragedy. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on trees. I love trees and their characteristics. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Joe Maverick
Date: 7/8/2022 12:18:00 AM
Well put Bill '
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/5/2022 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Bill; your brother in Christ. Blessings!
Date: 7/4/2022 11:26:00 AM
An absorbing and deep poem, containing wise insights, Joe. Beautifully written! :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/4/2022 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn; have a safe 4th of July my friend. Blessings.
Date: 7/4/2022 7:13:00 AM
Much to gleam from this intellectual discourse my friend. Your poem makes me pause and think. Whatever gives them comfort--let them find their own truth--such as the one you convey.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/4/2022 9:58:00 AM
For sure, Vijay~very wise: it is not that no one sees truth, nor should the focus be that my special truth is different from the truth of others, each having his or her own -- it is that there are countless truths, and we should all strive separately and together, to bring them forth for the greater good of God and His/Her entire Humanity. Blessings my friend.
Date: 7/4/2022 5:46:00 AM
In the same way a tree has a body above the crust of the earth, it also has a gnarled root system under the earth's crust struggling to support the whole being ! So you too see yourself as a struggling man striving for perfection drawing sustenance from God just as the roots of the tree do. A poem which goes deep beyond the peripheral meaning ! Great poem, Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/4/2022 10:02:00 AM
Very perceptive! I think you are on to something here. Blessings my friend. Thank you so much for reasoning this one out, and shedding your personal light on the subject -- we are God's Majority. Greatest when we join mind with heart.
Date: 7/3/2022 1:57:00 PM
Prince de Mino, this is one of your best! Hence, fave for me, professors can be thick headed…A degree does not give them a corner on truth. Smart b_utts fill the planet. They are not God. Hugs, Panagiota xxx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2022 3:04:00 PM
Oh well...he still passed me, but just:) Thank you, Pangie.
Date: 7/2/2022 10:37:00 AM
Joe, I loved the part about dogs and that professor not believing they can love. The whole poem is awesome!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2022 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea; that was cute, and a true story as well. I liked music and art classes better.

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