The Traveler and the Rose

A strange blue rose - alone
midst an array of clustered flowers -
a few of them her friends -
the shy violets, lovely white lilies, and bold marigolds.
In the gracious garden spot the traveler singled her out -
his gaze resting admiringly upon her.
Each day as he passed that spot,
she was the one he sought. . . 

And day by day the traveler came around,
speaking through the fence softly in sweet sounds
that wafted her way with the wind.
Persistent wasp, in guise of a honeybee,
he tried so hard to wear that flower down. . . 
till unexpectedly, he strode right through the gate,
and blissfully ignorant of a rose's care,
plucked her up, swept her high up into the air,
and uprooted that blue rose from her safe soil.

But he did not a gardener make.
Knowing nothing of roses,
he knew very little of any flower he pursued.
Moreover, one mere blue rose cannot long compete
with the other bright fanciful flowers
which, along that traveler's path, he was sure to meet.

Those soft whispered words
that caressed her blossomed cheek
soon ceased.
And the water to her soul (if a rose has a soul,
he did not care to know), stopped its flow. 
Scars he left -
new thorns on her stem that grew outward
from his cruel cut, 
but she'd go on. . . . 

Long time replanted now in solid refuge ground,
the strange blue rose
has gained self-understanding,
that one thing for himself (she imagines)
which the traveler she so briefly knew
has never found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 23, 2013 at 9:11 PM
Andrea, , congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 11:05 PM
Andrea, nice nice... love this one... I noticed i had a good win here tooooo.... time to say good night... PD
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 5:40 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
Rain Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 3:37 PM
I see the bouquet as I read ..excellent !
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Incredible write, Andrea, of a strong, beautiful soul! Congrats on your winning placement! I enjoyed reading this morning. Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Andrea
Posey Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 4:46 AM
You always write so beautifully!! I feel incompetent when trying to comment on your work. So, a simple Congratulations will have to suffice..... You know I love ya.... Doncha...... Jake
May Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 5:47 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
Omara Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 10:12 PM
Sad about the beautiful, strange blue rose. But, it had metal petals.-Red
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win for your poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes". Love, Carol
Aul Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 9:10 AM
Congrats on your win....I didn't read this one until now....I really like your poems.........George
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February 15, 2011 at 11:33 AM
I find this traveler most intriguing, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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February 15, 2011 at 8:28 AM
a marvellously metaphorical poem Andrea, congrats on your 5th place win...
Neels Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 3:51 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your great win in DG's contest, love Wilma
George   Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 1:26 AM
I loved this one the first time I read it. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN in Deb's contest, Andrea. Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 10:24 PM
soo taken by the sheer beauty of this one, andrea.. roses for you for the big WIN!! :) hugs, nette
Gorelick Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:38 PM
Wow, love the hidden meanings here..congrats to you and your blue rose. BG
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:28 PM
Apparently Debbie liked this entry, and I like it as well. Congratulations on winning in the contest with this presentation.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:04 PM
Congrats Andrea my friend on another amazing win in Debbie's contest with another amazing write luv.. enjoy...
Mannan Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 7:57 PM
A fantastic story in rhyme. Love it. Many congrats
Johnson Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 6:11 PM
Grteat entry Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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February 10, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Yeeeeeaah!Got it!To my FAVs---kash
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February 6, 2011 at 5:12 PM
The best so far for me Andie, the concept and the feeling are strong, yet, I don't think you need to be the rose...this is the beauty of Andie! The titles weak, think on it. [actually I think you've at least 2 poems here?] Light & love
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 8:34 AM
But I am the rose and this happened to me
Ward Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 4:22 AM
Andrea, I really liked this poem. I really felt for the flower that the blue rose just pulled out of the soil. Thank you for your comments on my writing. I am new at writing. I live in Southport, NC. I am blessed to live only 5 miles from the ocean. I go there everyday. It is my solace.
Austin Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Oh, my God! When I posted my latest poem I had forgotten your fine poem. Please don't hate me. The poem is purely for fun. Love, Dave
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