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The Thrill of Life

Baby let me be the only one to warm you like yellow sun I be the bullet you be the gun Shoot your shot our love is fun We can be silly and tease away Life is so thrilling because we play Hazel happy feelings singing we slay Touch so healing that we purple pray love of a lifetime chocolate kiss yellow hug never get enough

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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/30/2023 9:25:00 AM
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Sweet whimsy Karen. A light and flirty thrill! hugs Linda :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/30/2023 10:59:00 AM
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Thanks Linda!
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Michael Maul
Date: 10/17/2023 2:29:00 PM
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This reminds me of the feeling you get at the beginning of spring
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2023 2:34:00 PM
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I'm glad this has a springy feel for you. I love spring. Thanks for commenting Michael. Hugs
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Bill Baker
Date: 10/10/2023 9:45:00 PM
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Playful light poetry, my friend. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 10:38:00 PM
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Hugs Bill.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/10/2023 1:45:00 AM
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I would say this is "Light Verse". Title; "The Thrill of Life". Smashing poem. Blessings.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 10:37:00 PM
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Thanks Victor! I really like that. Will use it.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2023 7:20:00 PM
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'I be the bullet, you be the gun.' Fantabulous line, Karen. Just LOVE, love, Love it! Thanks, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2023 7:29:00 PM
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Aw thanks!
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Susan Manley
Date: 10/9/2023 9:48:00 AM
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This teases at half thought through feelings. I love the light hearted expression, that it clearly brings joy.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2023 12:40:00 PM
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Thanks Susan!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/8/2023 9:38:00 PM
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Nice flow. A captivating poem.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2023 11:09:00 PM
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Really? Hmmm thank you!

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